IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life.

Đồng ý / không đồng ý 40 phút · tối thiểu 250 từ Bài mẫu 6.0 Bài mẫu 7.0 Bài mẫu 9.0 trong app

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Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

290 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that women are better at taking care of children than men, so women should spend more time raising children and less time on their careers. I strongly disagree with this opinion.

Firstly, I do not think that women are naturally better at childcare than men. Taking care of children is a skill that people can learn. Many fathers today are very good at looking after their children, for example feeding them, playing with them and helping them with homework. In some countries like Sweden, many fathers stay at home with their babies, and their children grow up happily. Therefore, it is not true that only women can raise children well.

Secondly, women have the same right to work and develop their careers as men. Many women study hard at university and want to have a successful career. If they have to stop working to look after children, they will lose their skills and their chance to get promoted. This is not fair. Moreover, when women work, they can earn money for their family and contribute to the economy of the country.

Thirdly, children need both their mother and their father. If fathers spend more time with their children, the children can learn different things from both parents, and the relationship between fathers and children will be stronger.

In my opinion, both parents should share the responsibility of raising children, and both of them should have the chance to work. The government should support families by giving maternity and paternity leave and providing cheap childcare.

In conclusion, I disagree that women should focus more on raising children and less on their careers, because men can also take care of children well and women have the right to work.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

279 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is sometimes argued that women are naturally better at caring for children than men, and that they should therefore prioritise child-rearing over their careers. I strongly disagree with this view, as it is based on a questionable assumption and leads to an unfair conclusion.

Firstly, the claim that women are inherently better at childcare is not well supported. While mothers may have a special role in the early months, particularly if they breastfeed, most parenting skills, such as patience, communication and providing emotional support, are learned rather than innate. The fact that women have traditionally done most of the childcare largely reflects social expectations rather than biological ability. In countries where fathers are encouraged to take paternity leave, such as Sweden and Norway, many men have proved to be highly capable and involved parents.

Secondly, even if some women were better at childcare, it would not follow that they should sacrifice their careers. Women have the same right as men to education, financial independence and professional fulfilment. Expecting them to step back from work limits their earnings and opportunities for promotion, contributing to the gender pay gap and making them financially dependent on their partners. It also wastes the talents of highly educated women, which is a loss for the economy as a whole.

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