IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Investment in local amenities such as leisure centres is the best way for the government to foster a good community spirit.

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Investment in local amenities such as leisure centres is the best way for the government to foster a good community spirit.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What other measures do you think might be effective?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

276 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people think that the best way for the government to create a good community spirit is to spend money on local facilities such as leisure centres. I partly agree with this idea, but I think there are also other ways to build a strong community.

On the one hand, local amenities can help people in a community to meet and get to know each other. For example, at a leisure centre, people can play sports together, join fitness classes or take part in competitions. Children can make friends with other children who live nearby, and parents can talk to each other while they wait. Parks, libraries and community halls can also bring people together. As a result, people feel more connected to their neighbourhood.

On the other hand, I do not think that building leisure centres is the best way. Some people do not like sport, so they will not use these places. In addition, building and running leisure centres is very expensive, and in some areas, the money could be used for other important things.

There are other measures that can also be effective. Firstly, the government can organise local events, such as festivals, markets and concerts, which everyone can join. Secondly, the government can support volunteer groups, for example groups that clean the streets or help old people. When people work together for their community, they feel proud and closer to each other. Thirdly, schools can encourage parents to take part in school activities.

In conclusion, I partly agree that investing in local amenities can help to build community spirit, but I believe that local events and volunteer activities are also very important.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

283 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is often argued that the most effective way for governments to strengthen community spirit is to invest in local facilities such as leisure centres. While I agree that such amenities can play a useful role, I do not believe they are necessarily the best approach, and other measures may be equally or more effective.

There is no doubt that local amenities can bring people together. Leisure centres, parks, libraries and community halls provide shared spaces where residents of different ages and backgrounds can meet, take part in activities and form friendships. For example, sports clubs and fitness classes encourage regular interaction, while libraries often host events for families and older people. Without such spaces, people may have few opportunities to meet their neighbours, particularly in large cities.

However, building facilities alone does not guarantee a strong sense of community. Many people may not use leisure centres, either because they are not interested in sport or because they cannot afford the fees. Moreover, community spirit depends on active participation and a sense of shared responsibility, which buildings by themselves cannot create.

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