IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Some people regard eating meat as completely wrong.

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Đề bài

Some people regard eating meat as completely wrong.

To what extent do you agree?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

275 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Nowadays, more and more people become vegetarian, and some of them think that eating meat is completely wrong. In my opinion, I disagree with this view, although I understand some of their reasons.

On the one hand, there are some reasons why people think eating meat is wrong. Firstly, many animals are kept in very bad conditions on big farms. For example, chickens are kept in small cages and they cannot move freely. Some people think it is cruel to kill animals for food when we can eat other things. Secondly, producing meat is bad for the environment. Raising cows needs a lot of land and water, and cows produce gases that cause global warming. Moreover, eating too much red meat can cause health problems, such as heart disease.

On the other hand, I do not think that eating meat is completely wrong. Firstly, meat is a good source of protein, iron and vitamins, which are important for our health, especially for children. Secondly, eating meat is part of the culture and tradition in many countries. For example, in my country, many traditional dishes have meat, and people eat them at festivals and family parties. In addition, in some places, people cannot grow enough vegetables, so they need to eat meat to survive.

In my opinion, people can eat meat, but they should eat less meat and choose meat from farms that treat animals well. This is better for their health and for the environment.

In conclusion, although eating meat can cause some problems for animals and the environment, I disagree that it is completely wrong, because it is important for our health and culture.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

279 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

In recent years, a growing number of people have adopted vegetarian or vegan diets, and some argue that eating meat is morally unacceptable. While I accept that there are valid concerns about meat consumption, I do not agree that it is completely wrong.

Those who oppose eating meat raise several important points. From an ethical perspective, many animals raised for food are kept in intensive farms where they suffer from overcrowding, stress and restricted movement. Many people believe that causing such suffering is unjustifiable when nutritious plant-based alternatives are widely available. Environmental concerns are also significant: livestock farming is a major source of greenhouse gas emissions and a leading cause of deforestation and water pollution. In addition, high consumption of processed and red meat has been linked to health problems such as heart disease and certain cancers.

Nevertheless, I believe it is an exaggeration to say that eating meat is entirely wrong. Humans have eaten meat throughout history, and it remains an important source of protein, iron and vitamin B12. In some regions, such as the Arctic or arid grasslands, where crops are difficult to grow, animal products are essential for survival. Meat also plays a central role in many cultural and religious traditions. Furthermore, the ethical and environmental problems are mainly associated with intensive farming, rather than with meat consumption itself; animals raised humanely on small, sustainable farms present far fewer concerns.

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