IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years.

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The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
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Bài mẫu band 6.0

273 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

In the last 50 years, the position of women has changed a lot in many countries. However, some people believe that these countries still have not achieved gender equality. I completely agree with this opinion.

Firstly, it is true that women's lives have improved a lot. In the past, many women did not go to university and they stayed at home to look after children. Today, many women study at university and have good jobs, for example as doctors, lawyers or business managers. Women can also vote and take part in politics in most countries. In some countries, there have been female presidents and prime ministers.

However, I believe that gender equality has not been achieved yet. Firstly, in many countries, women still earn less money than men, even when they do the same job. Secondly, there are still not many women in top positions in companies and governments. For example, most big companies in the world are still led by men. Thirdly, women usually do more housework and take care of children more than men, even when they also work full-time. This makes it difficult for them to develop their careers. Moreover, in some countries, women still face discrimination and violence.

In my opinion, governments and companies need to do more to support women. For example, they should make laws about equal pay and give parents more support with childcare.

In conclusion, although the position of women has improved a lot over the past 50 years, I agree that these societies have not achieved full gender equality yet, because women still face many problems such as lower pay and fewer leadership opportunities.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

263 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Over the past half-century, the status of women has improved dramatically in many societies. Nevertheless, I strongly agree that none of these societies can yet claim to have achieved full gender equality.

There is no doubt that considerable progress has been made. Women now have access to education at all levels, and in many countries they outnumber men at university. They have entered professions that were once dominated by men, such as medicine, law and engineering, and laws in most developed countries prohibit discrimination on the basis of gender. In politics, too, women have gained influence, with an increasing number serving as members of parliament, ministers and even heads of government.

However, significant inequalities remain. The gender pay gap persists in almost every country, with women earning, on average, less than men, partly because they are concentrated in lower-paid sectors and partly because of discrimination. Women are also seriously under-represented in senior positions: only a small proportion of large companies are led by female chief executives. At home, women still carry out the majority of unpaid domestic work and childcare, which often limits their career progression, especially after having children. Furthermore, issues such as sexual harassment and domestic violence continue to affect women disproportionately.

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