IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Scientific developments in farming always bring major benefits.

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Scientific developments in farming always bring major benefits.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

270 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Science has changed farming a lot in the last hundred years. Some people believe that scientific developments in farming always bring big benefits. I partly agree with this opinion, because although science has helped farmers in many ways, it has also caused some problems.

Firstly, there is no doubt that science has brought many benefits to agriculture. New machines like tractors and harvesters help farmers to work faster and produce more food with fewer workers. In addition, scientists have created new types of seeds and fertilisers that help crops grow better. As a result, farmers can produce much more food than before, and this helps to feed the growing population of the world. For example, the Green Revolution helped countries like India to reduce hunger.

However, I do not agree that these developments are always good. Firstly, many chemical fertilisers and pesticides are harmful to the environment. They can pollute rivers and soil, and kill insects such as bees, which are important for nature. Secondly, some people are worried about genetically modified food, because we do not know the long-term effects on human health. Moreover, modern farming methods often need a lot of money, so small farmers in poor countries cannot afford them and they may lose their jobs.

In my opinion, science is very useful for farming, but it must be used carefully. Governments should control the use of chemicals and support small farmers.

In conclusion, I partly agree that scientific developments in farming bring major benefits, such as higher food production. However, they do not always bring benefits, because they can also damage the environment and people's health.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

272 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Scientific progress has transformed agriculture over the past century, from mechanisation to genetic engineering. While I accept that these developments have brought enormous benefits, I disagree with the claim that this is always the case, as some innovations have had serious negative consequences.

There is no denying that science has made farming far more productive. The introduction of machinery, high-yield crop varieties and modern fertilisers has enabled farmers to produce much larger quantities of food on the same amount of land. The so-called Green Revolution of the 1960s, for example, dramatically increased wheat and rice production in countries such as India and Mexico, saving millions of people from famine. More recently, technologies such as drip irrigation and drought-resistant crops have helped farmers cope with water shortages and climate change.

However, not all scientific developments have been beneficial. The heavy use of chemical pesticides and fertilisers has polluted rivers, degraded soil quality and contributed to the decline of pollinating insects such as bees. Similarly, the overuse of antibiotics in intensive livestock farming has been linked to the rise of antibiotic-resistant bacteria, which pose a threat to human health. In addition, expensive technologies often favour large agricultural corporations, making it difficult for small-scale farmers to compete and sometimes forcing them out of business.

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