IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Many young people choose to take a year out between finishing school and starting university in order to gain work experience or to travel.

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Many young people choose to take a year out between finishing school and starting university in order to gain work experience or to travel. The experience of non-academic life this offers benefits the individual when they return to education.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

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Nowadays, many young people take a year off after they finish school and before they start university. During this gap year, they often work or travel. Some people believe that this experience helps them when they go back to study. I mostly agree with this opinion.

Firstly, a gap year can help young people become more mature and independent. When they work or travel, they have to look after themselves, manage their money and solve problems without help from their parents or teachers. As a result, when they go to university, they are more responsible and they can manage their time better. Secondly, working during a gap year helps students to get useful skills and experience. For example, a student who works in a company can learn how to communicate with customers and work in a team. These skills can help them in their studies and in their future jobs. Thirdly, travelling to other countries helps young people learn about different cultures and maybe a new language, and this makes them more open-minded.

However, a gap year also has some disadvantages. Some students may lose the habit of studying, and it can be difficult for them to go back to studying after one year. Others may waste their time and do nothing useful. In addition, travelling can be very expensive, so not all students can afford it.

In my opinion, a gap year is useful if students plan it carefully and use the time to learn new things.

In conclusion, I agree that a gap year can benefit young people when they return to education, because it helps them become more mature and gain useful skills, although it also has some risks.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

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It has become increasingly common for young people to take a gap year between school and university, during which they work or travel. While this experience is not beneficial for everyone, I largely agree that it can have a positive effect on students when they return to education.

The main advantage of a gap year is that it helps young people develop maturity and independence. Living away from home, managing their own finances and dealing with unfamiliar situations force them to take responsibility for their decisions. As a result, students who have taken a gap year often arrive at university more self-disciplined and better able to manage their workload. In addition, a year of work experience can give students practical skills, such as teamwork and communication, as well as a clearer idea of their career goals. This can help them choose a university course more carefully and approach their studies with greater motivation. Travelling, meanwhile, broadens their horizons and can improve their language skills and cultural awareness.

Nevertheless, a gap year is not always beneficial. Some young people find it difficult to return to academic study after a long break, having lost the habit of revising and writing essays. Without a clear plan, a gap year can also become a wasted year spent with little purpose. Moreover, travelling abroad can be expensive, which means that this opportunity is not equally available to students from less wealthy families.

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