IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world.

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Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

271 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries in the world, and it brings a lot of money to many countries. However, some people believe that the damage tourism causes to local cultures and the environment is often ignored. I mostly agree with this opinion.

Firstly, it is true that tourism is very important for the economy. Tourists spend money on hotels, restaurants, transport and souvenirs, and this creates many jobs for local people. For many countries, such as Thailand or Spain, tourism is one of the main sources of income. Because of this, governments and businesses usually focus on attracting more tourists and making more money.

However, I agree that the negative effects of tourism are often ignored. Firstly, tourism can damage the environment. When too many tourists visit a place, they create a lot of rubbish and pollution. For example, some beaches and mountains become dirty, and coral reefs are damaged by tourists. In addition, new hotels and resorts are often built in natural areas, which destroys forests and the homes of wild animals. Secondly, tourism can also harm local cultures. Some traditional festivals and customs are changed to entertain tourists, so they lose their real meaning. Local people may also start to copy the lifestyle of foreign tourists.

In my opinion, governments should pay more attention to these problems. They should make rules to protect the environment and local culture, for example by limiting the number of tourists in some places.

In conclusion, I agree that although tourism brings many economic benefits, the damage it causes to local cultures and the environment is often not taken seriously enough.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

265 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Tourism has grown rapidly in recent decades and is now a major source of income for many countries. However, I agree that the harm it can cause to local cultures and the natural environment is frequently overlooked, although awareness of this issue is gradually increasing.

The economic importance of tourism is undeniable. It generates employment in hotels, restaurants and transport, supports local businesses and brings in valuable foreign currency. Because of these benefits, governments and investors often prioritise growth in visitor numbers, sometimes with little consideration of the long-term consequences.

The environmental costs of this approach can be severe. Popular destinations often suffer from overcrowding, pollution and excessive use of resources such as water and energy. The construction of hotels, airports and resorts can destroy natural habitats, and fragile ecosystems such as coral reefs are easily damaged by large numbers of visitors. Tourism can also have a damaging effect on local cultures. Traditional ceremonies may be turned into commercial performances, local crafts may be replaced by mass-produced souvenirs, and rising property prices can force residents out of historic town centres, as has happened in cities such as Venice and Barcelona.

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