IELTS Writing Task 2 · Advantages & Disadvantages

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries.

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Nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries.

Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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  • Từ nối: One major benefit…, A significant drawback…

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In many countries today, employers value work experience more than knowledge when they choose new employees. In my opinion, this trend has more advantages than disadvantages.

There are several advantages of valuing experience. Firstly, people with experience already know how to do the job, so they do not need much training. This saves time and money for companies. For example, an experienced engineer can start working on a project immediately, while a new graduate may need several months to learn. Secondly, experienced workers usually have good practical skills, such as solving problems, dealing with customers and working in a team. These skills are often learned at work, not at university. Thirdly, experienced people often make fewer mistakes because they have faced similar situations before.

However, there are also some disadvantages. The biggest problem is that young people and new graduates find it difficult to get their first job. Many job advertisements ask for two or three years of experience, but young people cannot get experience if nobody gives them a job. As a result, many young people are unemployed. In addition, some experienced workers may not know about new ideas or new technology, because they have been doing the same thing for many years. People with up-to-date knowledge can bring new ideas to the company.

In my opinion, companies should consider both experience and knowledge. They can also give young people chances through internships and training programmes.

In conclusion, although valuing experience more than knowledge makes it hard for young people to find jobs, I believe the advantages, such as saving time and having practical skills, are more important.

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In many countries, employers increasingly place greater value on practical experience than on academic knowledge when recruiting staff. While this trend has some drawbacks, I believe that its advantages are greater.

The main benefit of prioritising experience is that experienced employees can contribute to a company immediately. Having already worked in similar roles, they understand how organisations operate, require less training and are able to handle real-world problems effectively. Many valuable skills, such as negotiating with clients, managing a team or dealing with unexpected crises, are learned through practice rather than from textbooks. Hiring experienced staff therefore reduces risks and training costs for employers, which is particularly important for small businesses with limited resources.

On the other hand, this emphasis on experience has certain disadvantages. Most notably, it creates a barrier for young people entering the job market. Graduates often face a frustrating situation in which they cannot find a job without experience, yet cannot gain experience without a job, which can contribute to high youth unemployment. In addition, overvaluing experience may cause companies to overlook candidates with up-to-date theoretical knowledge, especially in rapidly changing fields such as technology, where recent graduates may be more familiar with the latest developments than long-serving employees.

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