IELTS Writing Task 2 · Advantages & Disadvantages

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment.

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Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.

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  • Từ nối: One major benefit…, A significant drawback…

Bài mẫu band 6.0

275 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Tourism has grown very quickly in the last 50 years. Some people think that it has a bad impact on local people and the environment, while others believe that it is good for the economy. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give my opinion.

There are many advantages of tourism. The most important one is that it helps the economy. When tourists visit a country, they spend money on hotels, food, transport and souvenirs. This creates many jobs for local people, such as tour guides, hotel staff and drivers. In some countries, tourism is the main source of income. Moreover, governments can use the money from tourism to build better roads, airports and other facilities, which also help local people.

However, tourism also has some disadvantages. Firstly, it can damage the environment. Many tourists leave rubbish on beaches and in the mountains, and building hotels can destroy forests. Secondly, tourism can cause problems for local people. In popular places, the price of houses and food becomes very high, so local people cannot afford to live there. In addition, popular places become very crowded and noisy. Thirdly, local culture may change because of tourism, as some traditions are changed to entertain tourists.

In my opinion, tourism brings more advantages than disadvantages, especially for poor countries. However, governments should control tourism carefully, for example by limiting the number of tourists and making rules to protect the environment.

In conclusion, tourism has both good and bad effects. Although it can harm the environment and local people, I believe that it is good for the economy and its benefits are more important.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

263 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Over the past fifty years, tourism has expanded dramatically. While some argue that this growth has mainly harmed local communities and the environment, others emphasise its economic benefits. In my view, tourism is beneficial overall, provided that it is properly managed.

The economic advantages of tourism are considerable. It creates employment not only in hotels and restaurants but also in transport, retail and the production of local goods. For many developing countries, tourism is a major source of foreign income, which can be invested in infrastructure, education and healthcare. Tourism can also help to preserve cultural heritage, as the revenue from visitors to historical sites and museums can be used for their maintenance and restoration.

However, the rapid growth of tourism has also brought significant problems. Environmentally, popular destinations often suffer from pollution, waste and the destruction of natural habitats to make way for hotels and resorts. Large numbers of visitors can damage fragile ecosystems, such as coral reefs and mountain trails. For local residents, tourism can lead to overcrowding, traffic congestion and rising property prices, as homes are converted into holiday rentals. In cities such as Barcelona and Venice, many residents have protested that mass tourism has made their cities less liveable.

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