IELTS Writing Task 2 · Advantages & Disadvantages

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Nowadays many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games.

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Nowadays many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + nêu bên nào lớn hơn (nếu đề hỏi outweigh).
  2. Thân bài 1Các lợi ích (hoặc mặt yếu hơn), có giải thích.
  3. Thân bài 2Các bất lợi (hoặc mặt mạnh hơn), có giải thích và ví dụ.
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  • Đoạn bên bạn cho là nặng hơn nên viết sau và kỹ hơn.
  • Tránh liệt kê quá nhiều ý, 2 ý mỗi bên phát triển sâu là đủ.
  • Từ nối: One major benefit…, A significant drawback…

Bài mẫu band 6.0

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Nowadays, many families have computers at home, and a lot of children like playing video games. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children.

There are some advantages of playing video games. Firstly, some games can help children learn new things. For example, there are educational games that teach mathematics, languages or history in a fun way, so children are more interested in learning. Secondly, video games can improve some skills, such as problem-solving, memory and quick thinking. Many games require players to make decisions quickly and plan their strategies. Thirdly, playing online games with friends can help children to communicate and work in a team. In addition, video games can help children relax after a long day at school.

However, there are also many disadvantages. The biggest problem is that some children spend too much time playing games. As a result, they do not have enough time to study, do homework or sleep, and their results at school may become worse. Secondly, playing video games for a long time is bad for children's health. They sit in front of the screen for many hours, so they do not do enough exercise, and they may have problems with their eyes and their weight. Thirdly, some games are very violent, and children may copy this violent behaviour in real life. Moreover, some children become addicted to games and they spend less time with their family and friends.

In conclusion, video games can help children learn and develop some skills, but they also have many disadvantages, such as health problems and addiction. Therefore, parents should control the time their children spend on video games and choose suitable games for them.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

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With computers and gaming devices now found in most homes, playing video games has become one of children's favourite pastimes. This essay will consider both the benefits and the drawbacks of this activity.

Video games can offer children several advantages. Many games, particularly strategy and puzzle games, require players to solve problems, plan ahead and make quick decisions, which can develop cognitive skills such as logical thinking and concentration. Educational games can make learning subjects like mathematics, science and languages more engaging, especially for children who struggle with traditional teaching methods. Some studies also suggest that action games can improve hand-eye coordination and reaction times. Furthermore, multiplayer games allow children to cooperate with others towards shared goals, helping them develop teamwork and communication skills, while also providing a way to relax and socialise with friends.

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