IELTS Writing Task 2 · Advantages & Disadvantages

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following ways of learning a foreign language.

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Đề bài

Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following ways of learning a foreign language.

State which you consider to be the most effective.

- studying on your own

- taking lessons with a private tutor

- taking lessons as part of a class

- taking lessons online

- going to live in a country where the language is spoken

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Đề hỏi lợi và hại của một hiện tượng, hoặc lợi có lớn hơn hại không (Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?). Với dạng "outweigh" bắt buộc nêu bên nào nặng hơn.

  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + nêu bên nào lớn hơn (nếu đề hỏi outweigh).
  2. Thân bài 1Các lợi ích (hoặc mặt yếu hơn), có giải thích.
  3. Thân bài 2Các bất lợi (hoặc mặt mạnh hơn), có giải thích và ví dụ.
  4. Kết bàiKhẳng định lại đánh giá của bạn.
  • Đoạn bên bạn cho là nặng hơn nên viết sau và kỹ hơn.
  • Tránh liệt kê quá nhiều ý, 2 ý mỗi bên phát triển sâu là đủ.
  • Từ nối: One major benefit…, A significant drawback…

Bài mẫu band 6.0

331 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

There are many ways to learn a foreign language. In this essay, I will compare the advantages and disadvantages of three ways: studying on your own, taking lessons as part of a class, and going to live in a country where the language is spoken. Then I will say which way I think is the most effective.

Firstly, studying on your own has some advantages. It is cheap or free, because learners can use books, apps and websites. They can also study at any time and at their own speed. However, it is difficult to stay motivated when you study alone, and there is no teacher to correct your mistakes. In addition, learners have few chances to practise speaking with other people.

Secondly, taking lessons as part of a class is a popular way to learn a language. Students have a teacher who can explain grammar and correct their mistakes. They can also practise speaking with their classmates, and the lessons are usually cheaper than private lessons. On the other hand, the teacher cannot give much attention to each student, especially in a big class. Some students may also feel shy to speak in front of other people.

Thirdly, living in a country where the language is spoken is a very good way to learn. Learners hear and use the language every day, for example when they go shopping, talk to neighbours or watch TV. This helps them to improve their listening and speaking skills very quickly, and they can also learn about the culture. However, this way is very expensive, and it can be difficult at the beginning if learners do not know the basic language.

In my opinion, living in a country where the language is spoken is the most effective way, because learners have to use the language every day in real situations.

In conclusion, each way of learning has advantages and disadvantages, but I believe that living abroad is the best way to learn a foreign language.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

306 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

People learn foreign languages in many different ways, each with its own strengths and weaknesses. This essay will compare three of these methods, studying alone, taking lessons with a private tutor and living in a country where the language is spoken, before identifying which I consider most effective.

Studying independently, using textbooks, apps and online resources, is the most flexible and affordable option. Learners can study whenever and wherever they like and progress at their own pace. However, self-study requires a great deal of discipline, and many learners lose motivation without external support. Furthermore, without a teacher, errors often go uncorrected, and there are limited opportunities to practise speaking.

Taking lessons with a private tutor addresses many of these weaknesses. A tutor can tailor lessons to the learner's specific needs, provide immediate feedback and give them plenty of speaking practice. The one-to-one format also allows shy learners to speak without fear of embarrassment. The main drawback, however, is the cost, as private tuition can be expensive, especially over a long period. In addition, learners are exposed to only one speaker's accent and style.

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