IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Many people believe that increasing levels of violence on television and in films is having a direct result on levels of violence in society.

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Many people believe that increasing levels of violence on television and in films is having a direct result on levels of violence in society. Others claim that violence in society is the result of more fundamental social problems such as unemployment.

How much do you think society is affected by violence in the media?

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  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
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  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
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  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

295 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that the increase of violence on television and in films directly causes more violence in society. However, other people think that violence in society is caused by deeper social problems, such as unemployment. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

On the one hand, violence in the media can influence people, especially children and teenagers. Young people often copy what they see on television or in films. If they see their favourite characters using violence to solve problems, they may think that violence is acceptable. In addition, watching a lot of violence can make people less sensitive, so they do not feel shocked when they see violence in real life. There have been some cases where young criminals copied crimes from films.

On the other hand, I think that social problems are a more important cause of violence. When people are unemployed and poor, they may feel angry and hopeless, and some of them may turn to crime to get money. Other problems, such as drugs, alcohol, poor education and family problems, can also make people violent. For example, many violent crimes happen in poor areas where there are few jobs and many young people have nothing to do. Moreover, many people watch violent films, but most of them never become violent in real life.

In my opinion, violence in the media has a small effect on society, especially on children, but social problems are the main cause of violence. Therefore, governments should focus on reducing unemployment and poverty, and parents should also control what their children watch.

In conclusion, although media violence can affect some people, I believe that social problems such as unemployment have a much bigger effect on the level of violence in society.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

279 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

There is ongoing debate about the causes of violence in society. While some people believe that the increasing amount of violence on television and in films directly contributes to real-life violence, others argue that it stems from deeper social problems such as unemployment. In my view, media violence has some influence, but it is far less significant than social and economic factors.

Those who blame the media argue that repeated exposure to violent content can shape people's attitudes and behaviour, particularly among children. Young viewers may imitate violent acts performed by characters they admire, especially when violence is presented as exciting or rewarded. Furthermore, constant exposure to graphic violence may desensitise viewers, making real violence seem less shocking. There have been isolated cases in which criminals appear to have copied scenes from films or games.

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