IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Governments around the world spend too much money on treating illnesses and diseases and not enough on health education and prevention.

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Governments around the world spend too much money on treating illnesses and diseases and not enough on health education and prevention.

Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
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  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
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  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

261 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people think that governments spend too much money on treating diseases and not enough money on health education and prevention. I agree with this opinion for several reasons.

Firstly, preventing diseases is cheaper than treating them. For example, treating a person with heart disease or diabetes is very expensive, because they need medicine, hospital care and sometimes operations for many years. However, if the government teaches people to eat healthy food and do exercise, many people will not get these diseases. As a result, the government can save a lot of money.

Secondly, health education can help people to live longer and healthier lives. Many diseases today, such as obesity, lung cancer and heart disease, are caused by an unhealthy lifestyle, such as smoking, drinking alcohol, eating fast food and not doing exercise. If people know about the dangers of these habits, they may change their behaviour. For example, campaigns against smoking in many countries have helped to reduce the number of smokers.

Thirdly, prevention programmes like vaccinations can stop the spread of dangerous diseases. Vaccines are cheap, but they can protect millions of people from illnesses such as measles or flu.

However, I understand that governments still need to spend money on treating illnesses, because there will always be people who get sick, and they need good hospitals and doctors.

In conclusion, I agree that governments should spend more money on health education and prevention, because it is cheaper and it can help people to be healthier. However, they should still provide good treatment for people who are ill.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

276 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is often argued that governments devote too much of their health budgets to treating diseases and too little to education and prevention. I largely agree with this view, although treatment will always remain an essential part of healthcare.

The main argument for investing more in prevention is that it is often far more cost-effective than treatment. Chronic diseases such as heart disease, type 2 diabetes and many cancers are extremely expensive to treat, often requiring years of medication, hospital stays and specialist care. Yet many of these conditions are linked to preventable factors such as smoking, poor diet, physical inactivity and excessive alcohol consumption. By investing in public health campaigns, nutrition education and programmes that encourage exercise, governments could reduce the number of people developing these illnesses and, in turn, reduce long-term healthcare costs.

Prevention also improves people's quality of life. Rather than living for many years with a chronic illness, people who adopt healthier lifestyles can enjoy longer and more productive lives. Successful examples include anti-smoking campaigns, which have significantly reduced smoking rates in many countries, and vaccination programmes, which have controlled or eliminated diseases such as polio and measles at relatively low cost.

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