IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21.

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Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

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In many countries, people can get married at the age of 18. However, some people think that the legal age for marriage should be at least 21. I agree with this idea for several reasons.

Firstly, people at the age of 18 or 19 are often not mature enough to get married. At this age, many young people have just finished high school, and they do not have much experience of life. They may not understand the responsibilities of marriage, such as taking care of a family and solving problems with their partner. As a result, they may make wrong decisions and their marriage may not last long. For example, many young couples get divorced after a few years because they married too early.

Secondly, young people should have time to study and develop their careers before getting married. If they marry at 18, they may have to stop studying to work and earn money for their family, especially if they have children. This can make their life more difficult in the future. By the age of 21, many people have finished university or have a stable job, so they are more ready to support a family.

On the other hand, some people may say that 18-year-olds are adults and they should have the right to decide when to marry. This is true, but I think that marriage is a very serious decision, and waiting a few more years will not cause a big problem.

In conclusion, I agree that the legal age for marriage should be at least 21, because people at this age are more mature and more prepared for the responsibilities of family life.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

283 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

In most countries, the minimum legal age for marriage is currently 18, but some people argue that it should be raised to at least 21. While I understand the reasons behind this proposal, I only partly agree with it.

There are certainly good arguments for raising the marriage age. Many 18-year-olds lack the emotional maturity and life experience needed to make a lifelong commitment. They are still developing their identities and may change significantly in their early twenties, which can lead to incompatibility with a partner chosen at a younger age. Statistics in several countries show that couples who marry in their teens are more likely to divorce. In addition, early marriage, particularly when followed by children, may force young people, especially women, to abandon their education or career plans, limiting their opportunities later in life.

On the other hand, setting the legal age at 21 raises some problems. At 18, people are considered adults in most societies: they can vote, work, sign contracts and even serve in the military. It would therefore seem inconsistent to deny them the right to marry. Moreover, maturity varies greatly between individuals, and some 18- or 19-year-olds are perfectly capable of building a stable family. Raising the age might also encourage couples to live together without legal protection, which could leave partners and children more vulnerable.

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