IELTS Writing Task 2 · Discussion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Some people believe that Art gives our lives meaning and purpose.

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Some people believe that Art gives our lives meaning and purpose. Others believe that it is merely a distraction from real life.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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  1. Mở bàiGiới thiệu hai quan điểm + nêu quan điểm của bạn.
  2. Thân bài 1Quan điểm thứ nhất: lý do và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Quan điểm thứ hai (thường là quan điểm bạn ủng hộ): lý do và ví dụ.
  4. Kết bàiTóm tắt hai bên và khẳng định lại quan điểm.
  • Phải trả lời cả "give your own opinion", nhiều bài mất điểm vì quên.
  • Dùng: Proponents of… argue that…, On the other hand…
  • Hai đoạn thân bài nên dài tương đương.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

284 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people think that art gives meaning and purpose to our lives, while other people believe that it is only a distraction from real life. In this essay, I will discuss both opinions and give my own view.

On the one hand, some people think that art is not very important. They believe that people should focus on more practical things, such as work, money and family. In their opinion, activities like painting, going to the theatre or listening to music are only for entertainment and they help people to forget about their real problems for a short time. For example, a person who has money problems may watch a film to relax, but the film does not solve the problem. Moreover, some people think that governments should spend money on hospitals and schools, not on art.

On the other hand, many people believe that art is very important for our lives. Firstly, art can express feelings and ideas that are difficult to say in words. When people listen to music or look at a painting, they can feel happy, sad or inspired. Secondly, art helps people to understand their culture and history. For example, traditional music and paintings show how people lived in the past. In addition, creating art, like drawing or writing poems, can give people a sense of purpose and make them proud of themselves.

In my opinion, art is not just a distraction. Although it can help people relax, it also gives meaning to our lives because it connects us with our emotions and our culture.

In conclusion, although some people see art as a distraction, I believe it plays an important role in giving our lives meaning and purpose.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

282 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

There is some debate about the role of art in our lives. While some people argue that art gives life meaning and purpose, others regard it as nothing more than a distraction from reality. Having considered both views, I believe that art is far more than mere entertainment.

Those who see art as a distraction argue that it has little practical value. In their view, the real priorities in life are earning a living, supporting one's family and solving concrete problems, whereas novels, films and music simply offer a temporary escape from these responsibilities. Some also argue that public money spent on art galleries or theatres would be better invested in essential services such as healthcare and education, which have a more direct impact on people's well-being.

However, I believe this view underestimates the importance of art. Art allows people to express emotions and ideas that cannot easily be put into words, and it helps others to understand experiences different from their own. A powerful novel or film can raise awareness of social issues and inspire people to change their behaviour. Furthermore, art is a key part of cultural identity, preserving the traditions and history of a community and passing them on to future generations. On a personal level, creating art, whether painting, playing music or writing, can give people a sense of achievement and fulfilment that is often missing from their daily work.

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