IELTS Writing Task 2 · Discussion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative.

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Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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  1. Mở bàiGiới thiệu hai quan điểm + nêu quan điểm của bạn.
  2. Thân bài 1Quan điểm thứ nhất: lý do và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Quan điểm thứ hai (thường là quan điểm bạn ủng hộ): lý do và ví dụ.
  4. Kết bàiTóm tắt hai bên và khẳng định lại quan điểm.
  • Phải trả lời cả "give your own opinion", nhiều bài mất điểm vì quên.
  • Dùng: Proponents of… argue that…, On the other hand…
  • Hai đoạn thân bài nên dài tương đương.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

275 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Many schools organise competitive sports for teenagers, such as football or basketball competitions. Some people think that these sports have a good effect on the education of teenagers, while others believe that they have a bad effect. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

On the one hand, competitive sports can have a negative effect on teenagers' education. Firstly, students who play in sports teams have to practise many hours every week, so they may not have enough time to study and do their homework. As a result, their marks at school may become lower. Secondly, competition can make some teenagers feel stressed, especially when they lose a match. Some students may also become too aggressive because they only want to win.

On the other hand, competitive sports have many positive effects. Firstly, playing sports helps teenagers to be healthy and fit, and a healthy body can help them to study better. Secondly, team sports teach important skills such as teamwork, leadership and communication. For example, when students play football, they must work together and support each other to win. Thirdly, competitive sports teach teenagers how to deal with success and failure, which is an important lesson for their future life. Moreover, students who are good at sports may get scholarships to study at university.

In my opinion, competitive sports have more positive effects than negative effects. However, schools and parents should make sure that teenagers have a good balance between sports and study.

In conclusion, although competitive sports can take time away from studying and cause stress, I believe they have a positive effect on the education of teenagers.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

274 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Competitive sports play an important role in many schools, but there is some disagreement about whether they benefit or harm teenagers' education. In my opinion, provided they are managed sensibly, their effects are largely positive.

Those who believe competitive sports have a negative effect argue that they can distract students from their academic work. Teenagers who train and compete regularly may spend many hours each week on sport, leaving less time for studying, which could affect their exam results. Furthermore, the pressure to win can be intense, causing stress and anxiety, particularly for young people who are already under pressure academically. Critics also point out that an excessive focus on winning can encourage aggressive behaviour or unsportsmanlike conduct, and that less talented students may feel excluded or discouraged.

On the other hand, many people believe that competitive sports make a valuable contribution to education. Physical activity improves health and has been shown to enhance concentration and memory, which can actually improve academic performance. In addition, team sports teach essential life skills such as cooperation, leadership, discipline and time management. Competition also helps teenagers learn to set goals, persevere when facing difficulties and cope with both success and failure, which are qualities that will serve them well in their future careers.

Còn 2 đoạn của bài 7.0 và bài mẫu band 9.0

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