IELTS Writing Task 2 · Discussion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don’t.

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Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don’t.

Discuss both these points of views and give your own opinion.

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  2. Thân bài 1Quan điểm thứ nhất: lý do và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Quan điểm thứ hai (thường là quan điểm bạn ủng hộ): lý do và ví dụ.
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Bài mẫu band 6.0

289 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Professional athletes are very famous, and many young people admire them. Some people believe that they are good role models for young people, while others think they are not. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

On the one hand, many people believe that athletes are good role models. Firstly, they show young people the importance of hard work and discipline. To become a professional athlete, a person has to train for many hours every day for many years. For example, Cristiano Ronaldo is famous for his hard training and healthy lifestyle. Young people can learn that success comes from effort. Secondly, athletes encourage young people to do sport and live a healthy life. Thirdly, many athletes show good values such as teamwork, respect for others and never giving up.

On the other hand, other people think that athletes are not always good role models. Some athletes behave badly, for example they fight with other players, argue with referees or use drugs to improve their performance. Some also have problems in their private lives, such as drinking too much or breaking the law. When young people see this behaviour, they may copy it. In addition, many athletes earn a huge amount of money, and this can make young people think that money and fame are the most important things in life.

In my opinion, many athletes can be good role models, but not all of them. Young people should be careful and choose athletes who have good behaviour both on and off the field.

In conclusion, although some athletes behave badly, I believe that many professional athletes are good role models because they show the value of hard work, discipline and a healthy lifestyle.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

279 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Professional athletes are among the most admired public figures, particularly among young people. While some argue that they are excellent role models, others believe they set a poor example. In my view, many athletes can be positive role models, although young people should be encouraged to admire them for the right reasons.

Those who regard athletes as good role models emphasise the qualities required to succeed in sport. Reaching the top level demands years of dedication, discipline and resilience, and athletes frequently overcome setbacks such as injuries and defeats. These qualities are valuable lessons for young people in all areas of life. Athletes also promote physical activity and healthy living at a time when many young people lead sedentary lifestyles. Furthermore, team sports demonstrate cooperation and respect, and many athletes use their fame to support charities or speak out on social issues.

On the other hand, critics point out that some athletes behave in ways that are far from admirable. Incidents of violence, cheating and doping scandals can send the message that winning matters more than integrity. Some athletes have also been involved in drink-driving, gambling or other illegal behaviour off the field. In addition, the enormous salaries and celebrity lifestyles of top athletes may encourage young people to value wealth and fame rather than the effort behind success.

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