IELTS Writing Task 2 · Discussion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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  1. Mở bàiGiới thiệu hai quan điểm + nêu quan điểm của bạn.
  2. Thân bài 1Quan điểm thứ nhất: lý do và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Quan điểm thứ hai (thường là quan điểm bạn ủng hộ): lý do và ví dụ.
  4. Kết bàiTóm tắt hai bên và khẳng định lại quan điểm.
  • Phải trả lời cả "give your own opinion", nhiều bài mất điểm vì quên.
  • Dùng: Proponents of… argue that…, On the other hand…
  • Hai đoạn thân bài nên dài tương đương.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

291 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Many people believe that some people are born with special talents, for example in sport or music, while other people do not have these talents. However, some people think that any child can be taught to become good at sport or music. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

On the one hand, some people think that talent is natural. They believe that famous athletes and musicians were born with special abilities. For example, some children can sing very well or run very fast from a young age, even without training. Some people have a natural body type that is good for sport, such as being very tall for basketball. In addition, some famous musicians like Mozart could play music and write songs when they were very young children, so it seems that they were born with talent.

On the other hand, other people believe that any child can become good at sport or music if they are taught well. They think that hard work and practice are more important than natural talent. If children have good teachers and practise every day, they can improve their skills a lot. For example, many famous sportspeople started training when they were very young and practised for many hours every day. Moreover, support from parents and coaches is also very important.

In my opinion, both natural talent and practice are important. I think that most children can become good at sport or music if they work hard, but only people with natural talent can become world champions or very famous musicians.

In conclusion, although some people are born with special talents, I believe that with good teaching and hard work, any child can become a good sportsperson or musician.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

284 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

While it is commonly believed that some people are born with a natural talent for activities such as sport or music, others argue that any child can become a skilled athlete or musician with the right teaching. In my view, both innate ability and training are important, but they play different roles.

Those who believe in natural talent point to individuals who show exceptional ability from a very young age. Child prodigies such as Mozart, who composed music at the age of five, seem to possess gifts that cannot be explained by training alone. In sport, physical characteristics such as height, muscle type and lung capacity, which are largely inherited, can give certain people a significant advantage. Basketball players, for example, are usually much taller than average, and no amount of practice can change a person's height.

On the other hand, many people argue that practice and teaching are the key factors in developing skill. Research has suggested that expert performers in many fields have typically completed thousands of hours of deliberate practice. With dedicated teachers, appropriate training and strong motivation, most children can achieve a high level of competence in music or sport. Many successful athletes and musicians emphasise that their achievements are the result of years of hard work rather than natural gifts.

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