IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: People who cause their own illnesses through unhealthy lifestyles and poor diets should have to pay more for health care.

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People who cause their own illnesses through unhealthy lifestyles and poor diets should have to pay more for health care.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

274 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that people who become ill because of an unhealthy lifestyle or a bad diet should pay more for their health care. I disagree with this opinion for several reasons.

Firstly, it is very difficult to know the exact cause of an illness. For example, heart disease can be caused by eating unhealthy food, but it can also be caused by genes, stress or pollution. Many people who eat healthy food and do exercise still get sick. Therefore, it is not fair to make people pay more because doctors cannot be sure that their illness is their own fault.

Secondly, many people have an unhealthy lifestyle because of their situation, not because of their choice. Poor people often cannot afford healthy food such as fresh vegetables and fruit, so they buy cheap fast food. Some people work long hours, so they do not have time to exercise or cook healthy meals. If these people have to pay more for health care, their life will become even more difficult, and they may not go to the doctor when they are sick.

Thirdly, health care is a basic human right. Everyone should be treated equally in hospitals, whether they are rich or poor, healthy or unhealthy.

However, I understand that unhealthy lifestyles cost the government a lot of money. Instead of making sick people pay more, the government should put taxes on unhealthy products like cigarettes and sugary drinks, and use the money to educate people about healthy living.

In conclusion, I disagree that people who cause their own illnesses should pay more for health care, because it is unfair and difficult to prove.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

275 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It has been suggested that people whose illnesses result from unhealthy lifestyles, such as poor diets, smoking or lack of exercise, should have to pay more for their healthcare. Although I understand the reasoning behind this idea, I largely disagree with it.

Those who support this proposal argue that it would be fairer to taxpayers. Lifestyle-related diseases such as obesity, type 2 diabetes and lung cancer place a heavy financial burden on public health systems, and some feel it is unjust for people who live healthily to subsidise the consequences of others' choices. It is also argued that higher costs would encourage people to take greater responsibility for their health.

However, this policy would be very difficult to implement fairly. Most illnesses have multiple causes, including genetics, environmental factors and stress, so it is often impossible to determine to what extent a disease is self-inflicted. Moreover, unhealthy lifestyles are closely linked to poverty and education. People on low incomes frequently have limited access to healthy food, safe places to exercise and information about nutrition, so charging them more would punish the most disadvantaged members of society. There is also a risk that people would avoid seeking medical treatment because of the cost, allowing conditions to become more serious and ultimately more expensive to treat.

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