IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology.

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Đề bài

We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology.

How do you think it will change in the future?

Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
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  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
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  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

271 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Nowadays, people depend more and more on computer technology in their daily lives. In this essay, I will discuss how this may change in the future and whether it is good for us to rely so much on computers.

In the future, I think computers will become even more important in our lives. Artificial intelligence will be used in many jobs, for example in hospitals, banks and factories. Self-driving cars may become common, and robots may do housework for us. In addition, more people will study and work online from home. Smart homes will also be popular, where people can control lights, air conditioners and doors with their phones or voices.

In my opinion, relying on computers has both good and bad sides. On the one hand, computers make our lives easier and more convenient. They help us to communicate with people all over the world, find information quickly and do our work faster. For example, doctors can use computers to find diseases earlier and treat patients better.

On the other hand, depending too much on computers can cause problems. If the computer system breaks down or is attacked by hackers, many important services, such as banks or hospitals, may stop working. Moreover, people may lose some basic skills, such as handwriting, doing simple calculations or remembering information, because computers do everything for them. Many people also spend too much time on screens, which is bad for their health and relationships.

In conclusion, I believe that computers will become even more important in the future. Relying on computers is useful, but we should use them carefully and keep our own skills.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

270 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Computer-based technology now plays a central role in almost every aspect of our lives, from work and communication to shopping and entertainment. This essay will consider how this dependence is likely to develop in the future and whether such reliance is beneficial.

In the coming decades, our dependence on computers is likely to increase further. Artificial intelligence will probably take over a growing range of tasks, from diagnosing illnesses to driving vehicles and providing customer service. The "Internet of Things" will connect household appliances, cars and even city infrastructure, allowing them to communicate and operate automatically. Education and work are also likely to become increasingly digital, with more people learning and working remotely.

In my view, this reliance on computers is largely positive, although it carries certain risks. Computers have made many tasks faster, more accurate and more efficient, improving productivity and saving time. In medicine, for instance, computer analysis can detect diseases at an earlier stage, while the internet has made knowledge accessible to people around the world.

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