IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare.

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Đề bài

In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare.

A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

278 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

In many countries, the population is getting older very quickly, and this is making the cost of public healthcare too high. Some people think that in the future, people should pay for their own healthcare. I partly agree with this idea.

On the one hand, there are some reasons why people should pay for their healthcare. Firstly, when the number of old people increases, the government has to spend more and more money on hospitals, doctors and medicine. If the government continues to pay for everything, it may have to increase taxes a lot or cut money for other important services, such as education. Secondly, if people pay for their own healthcare, they may take better care of their health. For example, they may eat healthy food, do more exercise and stop smoking, because they do not want to pay for treatment.

On the other hand, I do not think that people should pay for all of their healthcare. Many people, especially poor people and old people, cannot afford expensive treatment. If they have to pay, they may not go to the doctor when they are sick, and their health will become worse. In addition, health is a basic human right, and everyone should have the right to receive medical care, whether they are rich or poor.

In my opinion, the best solution is a mixed system. The government should still pay for basic healthcare, but people who can afford it should pay part of the cost, for example through health insurance.

In conclusion, I partly agree that people should pay for their healthcare in the future, but the government must still help poor people and old people.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

284 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

As populations age in many parts of the world, the cost of public healthcare is rising to levels that some consider unsustainable. It has therefore been suggested that individuals should pay for their own healthcare in the future. While I accept that the current situation cannot continue indefinitely, I disagree that the burden should be shifted entirely to individuals.

There are some arguments in favour of individuals paying for healthcare. An ageing population means more people with chronic illnesses requiring long-term treatment, while a smaller working population pays the taxes that fund public health systems. If nothing changes, governments may be forced to raise taxes significantly or reduce spending in other important areas. Requiring people to contribute more directly, for example through compulsory health insurance, could ease this pressure. It might also encourage people to take greater responsibility for their own health by adopting healthier lifestyles.

However, making individuals fully responsible for their healthcare costs would have serious consequences. The elderly and the poor, who are most likely to need medical care, are often the least able to pay for it. Many might delay seeking treatment until their conditions became serious, which could ultimately increase costs and lead to worse health outcomes. Furthermore, access to healthcare is widely regarded as a basic right, and a system based solely on the ability to pay would greatly increase inequality.

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