IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Some people argue that the government should give every unemployed person a mobile phone and should make sure they have access to the Internet.

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Some people argue that the government should give every unemployed person a mobile phone and should make sure they have access to the Internet.

They believe this is the best way of using public money to reduce the problem of unemployment.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

289 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people think that the government should give every unemployed person a mobile phone and make sure that they can use the Internet. They believe that this is the best way to spend public money to reduce unemployment. I partly agree with this idea, but I do not think it is the best way.

On the one hand, giving mobile phones and Internet access to unemployed people can be helpful. Nowadays, most jobs are advertised online, and people often need to send their CV by email or fill in application forms on websites. Employers also usually contact candidates by phone or email. If unemployed people do not have a phone or the Internet, it is very difficult for them to find a job. In addition, the Internet can help them to learn new skills through free online courses.

On the other hand, I do not think this is the best way to reduce unemployment. Firstly, having a phone does not mean that a person has the skills that employers need. Many unemployed people need training and education to get a job. Secondly, many unemployed people already have a mobile phone, so this would waste public money. Thirdly, unemployment is often caused by a lack of jobs in the economy. In this case, giving people phones will not create new jobs.

In my opinion, the government should spend money on job training programmes and help companies to create more jobs. It could also provide free Internet access in public places such as libraries for people who need it.

In conclusion, although mobile phones and Internet access can help unemployed people to look for jobs, I do not believe that this is the best way to solve the problem of unemployment.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

290 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It has been suggested that governments should provide every unemployed person with a mobile phone and Internet access, as this would be the most effective use of public funds to tackle unemployment. Although I agree that digital access is important for job seekers, I do not believe this is the best solution.

There are some valid arguments in favour of this proposal. In today's job market, most vacancies are advertised online, applications are usually submitted electronically, and employers expect to contact candidates by phone or email. Without these tools, unemployed people are at a serious disadvantage. Internet access also enables people to take online courses, improve their skills and network with potential employers. For people living in remote areas, it may even allow them to work from home.

However, I believe that this approach addresses only a small part of the problem. Many people are unemployed because they lack the skills or qualifications that employers require, and a mobile phone alone will not change this. In addition, unemployment is often caused by wider economic factors, such as a recession or the decline of particular industries, which no amount of technology can solve. Furthermore, a large proportion of unemployed people already own a smartphone, so providing devices to everyone would be an inefficient use of public money.

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