IELTS Writing Task 2 · Discussion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Many people believe that modern music can have a negative impact on the young.

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Many people believe that modern music can have a negative impact on the young. Others believe the effect of modern music is positive.

Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Đề đưa ra hai luồng ý kiến và yêu cầu thảo luận cả hai (Discuss both views and give your own opinion). Cần cân bằng hai bên và vẫn nêu quan điểm riêng.

  1. Mở bàiGiới thiệu hai quan điểm + nêu quan điểm của bạn.
  2. Thân bài 1Quan điểm thứ nhất: lý do và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Quan điểm thứ hai (thường là quan điểm bạn ủng hộ): lý do và ví dụ.
  4. Kết bàiTóm tắt hai bên và khẳng định lại quan điểm.
  • Phải trả lời cả "give your own opinion", nhiều bài mất điểm vì quên.
  • Dùng: Proponents of… argue that…, On the other hand…
  • Hai đoạn thân bài nên dài tương đương.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

283 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Modern music, such as pop, rap and electronic music, is very popular among young people today. Some people think that it has a bad effect on young people, while others believe that its effect is good. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

On the one hand, some people believe that modern music has a negative impact on young people. Some songs have bad words or talk about violence, drugs and alcohol. When young people listen to these songs many times, they may think that this behaviour is normal and copy it. In addition, some music videos show unrealistic images of beauty and rich lifestyles, which can make young people feel unhappy with their own lives. Moreover, some teenagers spend too much time listening to music and following famous singers, so they do not focus on their studies.

On the other hand, other people think that modern music has a positive effect. Firstly, music helps young people to relax and reduce stress after studying or working. Secondly, many modern songs have positive messages about love, friendship, confidence and helping others. Thirdly, music can encourage young people to be creative. Many teenagers learn to play instruments, write songs or dance because of their favourite singers. Music also helps young people to make friends with people who have the same interests.

In my opinion, modern music is mostly positive, but parents should pay attention to the type of music their children listen to, especially young children.

In conclusion, although some modern music can have a bad influence on young people, I believe that its overall effect is positive because it helps them to relax, be creative and connect with others.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

283 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Modern music plays a central role in the lives of many young people, but opinions differ as to whether its influence is harmful or beneficial. In my view, while some modern music can have negative effects, its overall impact on young people is positive.

Those who believe that modern music harms young people often point to the content of certain songs. Some lyrics glorify violence, drug use, materialism or disrespectful attitudes towards women, and critics argue that repeated exposure to such messages can normalise these behaviours. Music videos and celebrity culture may also promote unrealistic standards of appearance and wealth, contributing to low self-esteem and pressure to conform. In addition, some parents worry that their children spend excessive amounts of time listening to music or following artists on social media at the expense of their studies.

On the other hand, there are strong arguments that modern music benefits young people. Music is a powerful way of expressing and managing emotions, and many teenagers find comfort and support in songs that reflect their own experiences. Many modern artists also promote positive messages about self-acceptance, mental health and social justice, encouraging young people to engage with important issues. Moreover, music can stimulate creativity, inspiring young people to learn instruments, write songs or produce music using digital technology, and it can bring them together through shared interests and live events.

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