IELTS Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed.

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Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring?

What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

273 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Many people think that zoos are not useful in the modern world and they should be closed. In this essay, I will discuss the problems that zoos cause and suggest some alternatives.

There are several problems with zoos. Firstly, animals in zoos do not live in their natural environment. Many of them are kept in small cages or areas, so they cannot run, hunt or move freely like in the wild. As a result, some animals become stressed or sick, and they may show strange behaviour, such as walking in circles all day. Secondly, animals are taken away from their families and natural groups, which is cruel, especially for intelligent animals like elephants and monkeys. Thirdly, some zoos only care about making money from visitors, so they do not take good care of the animals. In addition, zoos may teach children that it is acceptable to keep wild animals in cages.

If zoos are closed, there are some alternatives. The first alternative is wildlife parks or nature reserves, where animals can live in large natural areas and people can watch them from a distance. For example, in Africa, many tourists go on safaris to see lions and elephants in the wild. The second alternative is sanctuaries, which take care of injured or rescued animals. Moreover, people can learn about animals through documentaries, the internet and virtual reality, which can show animals in their real habitats.

In conclusion, zoos cause problems such as stress and poor living conditions for animals. However, there are better alternatives, such as wildlife parks, sanctuaries and documentaries, which can help people learn about animals without keeping them in cages.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

272 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Many people argue that zoos are outdated and should be closed. This essay will examine the problems associated with zoos and suggest some alternatives that could take their place.

The main problem with zoos concerns animal welfare. However well designed, zoo enclosures cannot replicate the vast and complex environments in which wild animals naturally live. Large and intelligent species, such as elephants, big cats and primates, often suffer in captivity, displaying signs of stress such as pacing, self-harm and repetitive behaviour. Animals may also be separated from their social groups or bred in captivity solely to attract visitors. Furthermore, some zoos, particularly those in countries with weak regulations, keep animals in poor conditions, prioritising profit over welfare. Critics also argue that zoos send a misleading message to the public, implying that wild animals exist for human entertainment.

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