IELTS Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives.

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Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives.

In what ways can society benefit from the contribution that older people can make?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

277 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Nowadays, people live longer and older people are healthier than in the past. Many people over the age of 65 can still have full and active lives. In this essay, I will discuss how society can benefit from the contribution of older people.

Firstly, older people can continue to work and use their knowledge and experience. Many older people have worked for a long time, so they have a lot of skills. For example, a retired doctor or engineer can work part-time or teach young workers. This helps companies because they do not need to spend a lot of money on training. In addition, when older people work, they pay taxes, which helps the government.

Secondly, older people can help their families. Many grandparents look after their grandchildren while the parents are at work. This saves money on childcare and allows young parents to work. Grandparents can also teach children about family history, traditions and good values.

Thirdly, older people can do volunteer work in the community. They often have more free time than younger people, so they can help in hospitals, schools, libraries or charities. For example, some retired teachers help children with their homework for free. This helps people in need and makes the community stronger.

Moreover, older people can share their life experience and give good advice to young people. They have faced many problems in their lives, so they can help young people to make better decisions.

In conclusion, older people can make a big contribution to society by continuing to work, taking care of their grandchildren, doing volunteer work and sharing their experience. Therefore, society should support older people to stay active.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

278 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

As life expectancy increases and older people remain healthier for longer, many people over the age of 65 are now able to lead full and active lives. This essay will examine the ways in which society can benefit from the contributions that older people make.

One of the most significant contributions older people can make is in the workplace. Many have accumulated decades of knowledge, skills and professional experience, which can be extremely valuable to employers. By working part-time or acting as consultants and mentors, they can pass on their expertise to younger colleagues, reducing training costs and improving productivity. Their continued employment also helps to address labour shortages in ageing societies and increases tax revenue, easing the pressure on pension systems.

Older people also play an important role within families. Grandparents frequently provide childcare, allowing parents to work while saving them the considerable cost of nurseries or babysitters. They also help to pass on family history, cultural traditions and values to younger generations, strengthening family bonds.

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