IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'.

How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

286 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

In the last thirty years, the number of people who own cars has increased very quickly. Some people say that many cities in the world have become "one big traffic jam". In this essay, I will discuss how true this statement is and suggest some ways to reduce the use of cars.

In my opinion, this statement is true for many big cities, especially in developing countries. In cities like Bangkok, Jakarta or Hanoi, the roads are often full of cars and motorbikes, especially during rush hours. People may spend two or three hours in traffic every day to go to work and come back home. However, this statement is not true for all cities. Some cities, such as Amsterdam or Singapore, have good public transport and fewer traffic problems, because the governments have controlled the number of cars.

There are several things that governments can do to encourage people to use their cars less. Firstly, they should improve public transport. If buses, trains and metro systems are cheap, fast and comfortable, more people will use them instead of their cars. Secondly, governments can make driving more expensive, for example by increasing the price of petrol and parking, or by making drivers pay a fee to enter the city centre. Thirdly, governments can build more bicycle lanes and walking paths, so people can cycle or walk safely to work or school. Moreover, companies can let their employees work from home some days a week, which can reduce the number of cars on the road.

In conclusion, I think that many big cities have serious traffic problems because of the increase in cars. Governments should improve public transport and make driving more expensive to solve this problem.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

275 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

The rapid growth in car ownership over the last three decades has led some people to describe many of the world's cities as "one big traffic jam". While this is something of an exaggeration, it reflects a real and serious problem in many urban areas.

In numerous major cities, particularly in fast-growing developing countries, traffic congestion has become a daily reality. In cities such as Jakarta, Lagos and Bangkok, commuters can spend several hours a day in slow-moving traffic, which wastes time, increases stress and causes significant air pollution. Even in wealthy cities such as Los Angeles and London, congestion during peak hours is a persistent issue. However, the statement is not universally true. Some cities, such as Copenhagen, Amsterdam and Singapore, have managed to limit congestion through effective planning, showing that traffic problems are not inevitable.

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