IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad.

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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad.

To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved?

What are the drawbacks?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

288 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Nowadays, more and more students decide to study in foreign countries. In this essay, I will discuss how this trend benefits the students and the countries, and also the drawbacks of studying abroad.

Firstly, studying abroad has many benefits for students. They can study at good universities with modern facilities and experienced teachers. They can also improve their foreign language skills, especially English, because they use it every day. In addition, living in another country helps students to become more independent and open-minded, because they have to take care of themselves and learn about a new culture. After they graduate, they often have better job opportunities.

Secondly, this trend also benefits the countries involved. The host countries, such as the UK, the USA or Australia, earn a lot of money from international students, because students pay high fees and spend money on rent, food and travel. For the home countries, when students come back, they bring new knowledge and skills that can help to develop their country. For example, many doctors and engineers in Vietnam studied abroad and then came back to work.

However, there are also some drawbacks. Studying abroad is very expensive, so only rich families can afford it. Students may also feel lonely and homesick, and they may have difficulty with the language and culture. Moreover, some students do not return to their home country after they graduate, because they want to stay and work abroad. This is called "brain drain", and it is bad for the home country because it loses talented people.

In conclusion, studying abroad brings many benefits to students and countries, such as better education and economic benefits. However, it also has drawbacks, such as high costs, loneliness and brain drain.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

278 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

A growing number of students are now choosing to pursue their education in other countries. This trend brings considerable benefits to the students themselves and to the countries involved, although it also has some notable drawbacks.

For students, the advantages of studying abroad are substantial. They can gain access to world-class universities, specialised courses and research facilities that may not be available in their home countries. Living in a foreign country also improves their language skills and intercultural understanding, and requires them to become more independent and adaptable. As a result, graduates with international experience are often highly valued by employers, particularly in multinational companies.

The countries involved also benefit. Host countries gain significant revenue from tuition fees and living expenses; in countries such as Australia and the UK, international education is a major export industry. International students also enrich campuses culturally and may contribute to the workforce after graduation. Home countries, meanwhile, can benefit when graduates return with advanced knowledge, skills and international networks, which can contribute to economic development and innovation.

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