IELTS Writing Task 2 · Problem & Solution

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems.

Nguyên nhân / vấn đề và giải pháp 40 phút · tối thiểu 250 từ Bài mẫu 6.0 Bài mẫu 7.0 Bài mẫu 9.0 trong app

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Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems.

What are these problems and how could they be reduced?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

273 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Nowadays, many films contain a lot of violence, such as fighting, shooting and killing. Many people believe that this is causing serious social problems. In this essay, I will discuss these problems and suggest some solutions.

There are several problems caused by violent films. Firstly, young people may copy the violent behaviour that they see in films. Children and teenagers often see the main characters in action films as heroes, so they may think that using violence to solve problems is normal and acceptable. As a result, they may fight with other children at school. Secondly, watching too much violence can make people less sensitive to the pain of other people. When people see violence in films many times, they may not feel shocked or sad when they see violence in real life. Thirdly, violent films can make some people, especially children, feel scared and have bad dreams.

There are some ways to reduce these problems. Firstly, the government should have a strict rating system for films, so that children cannot watch films with a lot of violence. Cinemas should check the age of customers before they buy tickets. Secondly, parents should control what their children watch on television and on the internet, and they should talk to their children about the difference between films and real life. Thirdly, film companies should reduce the amount of violence in their films and make more films with positive messages.

In conclusion, violent films can cause social problems such as violent behaviour among young people and less sensitivity to violence. To reduce these problems, governments, parents and film companies should work together to protect young people.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

274 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Many people are concerned that the high level of violence in modern films is contributing to serious social problems. This essay will discuss the main problems associated with violent films and suggest how they might be reduced.

The most frequently cited concern is that violent films may encourage aggressive behaviour, particularly among children and teenagers. Young viewers may imitate the actions of characters they admire, especially when violence is portrayed as exciting, glamorous or an effective way of solving problems. Another problem is desensitisation. Repeated exposure to graphic violence may cause people to become less sensitive to real suffering, which could reduce empathy and make violent acts seem less shocking. In addition, some research suggests that heavy viewers of violent content may develop an exaggerated fear of the world around them, believing it to be more dangerous than it really is, which can increase anxiety, especially among children.

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