IELTS Writing Task 2 · Problem & Solution

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies.

Nguyên nhân / vấn đề và giải pháp 40 phút · tối thiểu 250 từ Bài mẫu 6.0 Bài mẫu 7.0 Bài mẫu 9.0 trong app

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In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies.

What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

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In some countries, young people do not have much free time because they are under a lot of pressure to study hard. In this essay, I will discuss the causes of this problem and suggest some solutions.

There are several causes of this problem. Firstly, there is a lot of competition to get into good universities and get good jobs. In countries like South Korea, China and Vietnam, students have to take very important exams, and their results decide which university they can attend. Therefore, they study for many hours every day to get high scores. Secondly, many parents have high expectations for their children. They believe that a good education is the only way to have a successful life, so they push their children to study hard and send them to extra classes after school and at the weekend. Thirdly, the school curriculum in some countries is very heavy, with many subjects and a lot of homework.

There are some solutions to this problem. Firstly, the government should reduce the importance of one big exam and use other ways to assess students, such as projects and continuous assessment. This can reduce the pressure on students. Secondly, schools should reduce the amount of homework and include more activities such as sports, music and art in the school day. Thirdly, parents should understand that their children need time to relax and play, and that success is not only about exam results.

In conclusion, young people are under a lot of pressure because of competition for universities, high expectations from parents and a heavy curriculum. These problems can be reduced by changing the exam system, reducing homework and changing parents' attitudes.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

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In a number of countries, young people have very little leisure time and face intense pressure to succeed academically. This essay will examine the main causes of this situation and suggest some possible solutions.

The primary cause is fierce competition for educational and career opportunities. In countries such as South Korea, China and Japan, admission to prestigious universities is often determined largely by a single national examination, and a place at a top university is widely seen as the key to a well-paid and secure job. As a result, students may spend long hours studying, both at school and in private tutoring centres in the evenings and at weekends. Parental expectations also play a significant role. Many parents, having experienced economic hardship themselves, see education as the main route to a better life and invest heavily in their children's schooling, placing considerable pressure on them to achieve high grades. In addition, cultural values that emphasise academic achievement and family honour can intensify this pressure.

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