IELTS Writing Task 2 · Advantages & Disadvantages

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: It is becoming more and more

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Đề bài

It is becoming more and more
difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives.

Discuss the advantages and
disadvantages of living in a media rich society.

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Đề hỏi lợi và hại của một hiện tượng, hoặc lợi có lớn hơn hại không (Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?). Với dạng "outweigh" bắt buộc nêu bên nào nặng hơn.

  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + nêu bên nào lớn hơn (nếu đề hỏi outweigh).
  2. Thân bài 1Các lợi ích (hoặc mặt yếu hơn), có giải thích.
  3. Thân bài 2Các bất lợi (hoặc mặt mạnh hơn), có giải thích và ví dụ.
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  • Đoạn bên bạn cho là nặng hơn nên viết sau và kỹ hơn.
  • Tránh liệt kê quá nhiều ý, 2 ý mỗi bên phát triển sâu là đủ.
  • Từ nối: One major benefit…, A significant drawback…

Bài mẫu band 6.0

292 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Nowadays, it is very difficult to escape the influence of the media in our lives. We see news, advertisements and entertainment everywhere, on television, the internet, social media and our smartphones. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media-rich society.

There are several advantages. Firstly, the media gives us a lot of information quickly. We can know what is happening in the world in a few seconds, for example news about natural disasters, elections or new discoveries. This helps people to make better decisions and understand the world. Secondly, the media is a good source of education and entertainment. People can learn new skills through online videos and documentaries, and they can relax by watching films or listening to music. Thirdly, the media helps people to express their opinions and communicate with others. Social media allows people to share their ideas and connect with people all over the world.

However, there are also some disadvantages. Firstly, there is a lot of fake news and wrong information in the media, and many people believe it without checking. This can cause confusion and even danger, for example false information about health. Secondly, the media is full of advertisements, which encourage people to buy things they do not need. Thirdly, people spend too much time on the media, especially on their smartphones, so they have less time for their families, exercise and sleep. Moreover, the media often shows unrealistic images of beauty and success, which can make young people feel unhappy.

In conclusion, living in a media-rich society has advantages such as quick access to information, education and communication. However, it also has disadvantages such as fake news, too much advertising and spending too much time on media.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

284 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

In today's world, the media, including television, the internet, social media and advertising, has become almost impossible to avoid. Living in such a media-rich society brings both significant benefits and considerable drawbacks.

One of the main advantages is unprecedented access to information. People can follow news from around the world in real time, which helps them stay informed about important events and make better decisions as citizens and consumers. The media also offers vast educational opportunities, from documentaries and online courses to tutorials on almost any subject. In addition, social media has given ordinary people a voice, allowing them to share opinions, raise awareness of social issues and connect with others who share their interests. The media also provides a wide range of entertainment, from films and music to games.

On the other hand, living in a media-saturated environment has several disadvantages. The sheer volume of information makes it difficult to distinguish reliable sources from misinformation, and fake news can spread rapidly, influencing public opinion and even elections. People are also constantly exposed to advertising, which encourages materialism and consumerism. Furthermore, excessive media consumption can affect people's health and well-being. Spending long hours on screens can reduce physical activity, disrupt sleep and decrease face-to-face interaction. Social media in particular has been linked to anxiety and low self-esteem, especially among young people, who may compare themselves with the idealised images they see online.

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