IELTS Writing Task 2 · Advantages & Disadvantages

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e.g. at home, when travelling, etc.).

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Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e.g. at home, when travelling, etc.).

Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?

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  • Từ nối: One major benefit…, A significant drawback…

Bài mẫu band 6.0

264 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Nowadays, thanks to information technology, many people can do their work outside the office, for example at home or while they are travelling. In my opinion, the benefits of this are greater than the disadvantages.

There are many advantages of working outside the workplace. Firstly, people can save a lot of time because they do not need to travel to the office every day. For example, in big cities, people often spend one or two hours in traffic jams, so working from home can give them more free time. Secondly, people can have a better balance between work and family life. Parents who work at home can spend more time with their children. Moreover, companies can also save money, because they do not need big offices.

However, there are also some disadvantages. Some people find it difficult to concentrate at home because there are many distractions, such as television or children. In addition, people who work at home may feel lonely, because they do not meet their colleagues every day. Another problem is that the line between work and personal life can become unclear. Some people check their emails all the time, even at night or at the weekend, so they feel stressed.

In my view, these problems can be solved. People can create a quiet place to work at home and set fixed working hours. Companies can also organise meetings so that employees can meet each other regularly.

In conclusion, although working outside the workplace has some disadvantages, I believe the benefits, such as saving time and having more flexibility, are more important.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

271 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Advances in information technology have made it possible for many employees to work remotely, whether from home or while travelling. Although this flexibility has some drawbacks, I believe that its advantages are considerably greater.

The most obvious benefit is the time and money saved on commuting. In large cities, workers may spend several hours each day travelling to and from their workplace, which is both exhausting and costly. Remote working eliminates this, giving people more time for their families, hobbies and rest. It also allows employees to organise their working hours around personal commitments, which is particularly valuable for parents and carers. From an employer's perspective, mobile working can reduce office costs and allow companies to recruit talented staff regardless of where they live. There is also an environmental benefit, as fewer cars on the road means less pollution.

That said, working outside the office has its disadvantages. Some people struggle to stay motivated without the structure of a workplace, and home environments can be full of distractions. Remote workers may also feel isolated from their colleagues, which can affect both their well-being and teamwork. Furthermore, being constantly connected through laptops and smartphones can blur the boundary between work and personal life, leading some employees to work excessively long hours.

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