IELTS Writing Task 2 · Advantages & Disadvantages

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work.

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In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + nêu bên nào lớn hơn (nếu đề hỏi outweigh).
  2. Thân bài 1Các lợi ích (hoặc mặt yếu hơn), có giải thích.
  3. Thân bài 2Các bất lợi (hoặc mặt mạnh hơn), có giải thích và ví dụ.
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  • Tránh liệt kê quá nhiều ý, 2 ý mỗi bên phát triển sâu là đủ.
  • Từ nối: One major benefit…, A significant drawback…

Bài mẫu band 6.0

277 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

In the past, most people had to travel to their workplace every day. However, because of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are now working from home. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

There are many advantages of working from home. Firstly, people do not need to travel to work, so they can save time and money. For example, in big cities, people often spend one or two hours in traffic every day, and they also spend a lot of money on petrol or public transport. Secondly, working from home gives people more flexibility. They can organise their time and spend more time with their families. This is very useful for parents with young children. Thirdly, companies can save money because they do not need big offices, and there is less traffic and pollution in the city.

However, there are also some disadvantages. Firstly, some people find it hard to concentrate at home because of noise from their family, television or other distractions. Secondly, people who work from home may feel lonely, because they cannot talk to their colleagues face to face. This can also make teamwork more difficult. Thirdly, it can be difficult to separate work and personal life. Some people work too many hours because their office is in their home, so they feel stressed and tired.

In conclusion, working from home has advantages such as saving time and money and giving people more flexibility. However, it also has disadvantages, such as distractions, loneliness and difficulty separating work and private life. People should find a good balance to enjoy the benefits of working from home.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

277 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Thanks to computers, the internet and smartphones, a growing number of people now work from home rather than commuting to a workplace. This development has brought both significant benefits and certain drawbacks.

One of the main advantages of working from home is the elimination of the daily commute. This saves employees considerable time, money and stress, particularly in large cities where journeys to work can take several hours a day. The time saved can be spent with family, on exercise or on hobbies, improving people's quality of life. Working from home also offers greater flexibility, allowing people to arrange their work around personal commitments such as childcare. For employers, remote working can reduce the cost of office space and allow them to recruit talented staff regardless of where they live. In addition, fewer commuters means less traffic congestion and lower carbon emissions.

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