IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: In an essay, you often have to discuss the similarities or differences

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Đề bài

In an essay, you often have to discuss the similarities or differences
between two different opinions or ideas. Make sure the logic of your argument
is clear:

1) use phrases such as On the other hand, to introduce
differences and contrast.

2) use phrases such as In the same way, to introduce
similarities and comparisons.

3) use phrases such as Because of this, to introduce
effects and results.

Many people say that the only
way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education.
Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in
the world of work.

How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?

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Đề hỏi bạn đồng ý đến mức nào (To what extent do you agree or disagree?). Bạn phải nêu quan điểm rõ ngay mở bài và giữ nhất quán đến kết bài.

  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

296 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Many people believe that the only way to get a good job is to finish a university course. However, others think it is better to start working after school and gain work experience. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

On the one hand, a university education has many advantages. Firstly, many good jobs, such as doctors, lawyers, engineers and teachers, require a university degree. Without a degree, people cannot apply for these jobs. Secondly, university students learn a lot of knowledge and skills, such as critical thinking and research skills, which are useful in their future careers. Because of this, university graduates usually earn higher salaries than people without a degree. In addition, students can make useful connections with teachers and classmates, which can help them find jobs later.

On the other hand, starting work after school also has benefits. People who start working early can gain practical experience and earn money while their friends are still studying. They do not have to pay high university fees or borrow money. In the same way, some jobs, such as chefs, mechanics or salespeople, need practical skills more than a degree. Moreover, some very successful people, such as Bill Gates and Mark Zuckerberg, did not finish university, but they became very rich.

In my opinion, university education is very important for many jobs, but it is not the only way to get a good job. People should choose the path that suits their abilities and interests. For some people, vocational training or work experience may be a better choice.

In conclusion, although a university degree can help people get a good job, I do not agree that it is the only way, because work experience and practical skills are also very valuable.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

293 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

There is ongoing debate about whether a university degree is the only reliable route to a good job, or whether young people would benefit more from entering the workforce directly after school. In my view, while university education offers clear advantages, it is not the only path to a successful career.

Those who emphasise the importance of university education make several valid points. Many professions, including medicine, law, engineering and teaching, require a degree as a minimum qualification. University also develops valuable transferable skills, such as critical thinking, research and independent learning, which are highly sought after by employers. Because of this, graduates generally earn higher lifetime incomes and enjoy greater job security than non-graduates. In addition, universities provide opportunities to build professional networks and gain internships, which can open doors to competitive careers.

On the other hand, there are strong arguments for starting work after school. Young people who enter employment early can gain practical experience, develop a strong work ethic and progress within a company while their peers are still studying. They also avoid the substantial cost of university tuition and the burden of student debt. In the same way, apprenticeships and vocational training can lead to well-paid careers in skilled trades, such as plumbing or electrical engineering, where demand for workers is often high. Furthermore, in fast-changing sectors like technology, practical skills and experience can sometimes be valued more highly than formal qualifications.

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