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Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past.

Nguyên nhân / vấn đề và giải pháp 40 phút · tối thiểu 250 từ Bài mẫu 6.0 Bài mẫu 7.0 Bài mẫu 9.0 trong app

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In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past.

Why is this so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

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In the past, people often had close relationships with their neighbours, but nowadays this is less common. In this essay, I will explain the reasons for this and suggest some ways to improve contact between neighbours.

There are several reasons why people are not close to their neighbours today. Firstly, people are very busy with their work and study. They leave home early in the morning and come back late in the evening, so they do not have time to talk to their neighbours. Secondly, many people live in big apartment buildings in cities, where there are hundreds of people. They may not know who lives next door, and they rarely meet each other. Thirdly, people move house more often than in the past, for example because of their jobs, so they do not stay in one place long enough to make friends with their neighbours. Moreover, nowadays people spend a lot of time on their phones and computers, and they communicate with friends online instead of talking to people around them.

There are some ways to improve contact between neighbours. Firstly, local communities can organise events, such as parties, festivals or sports activities, so that neighbours can meet and get to know each other. Secondly, apartment buildings can have shared spaces, such as gardens, playgrounds or community rooms, where people can meet and talk. Thirdly, people can create online groups for their neighbourhood, where they can share information and help each other. In addition, people should try to be friendly, for example by saying hello or helping neighbours when they need it.

In conclusion, people are less close to their neighbours because of busy lifestyles, city living and technology. However, community events, shared spaces and online groups can help to improve relationships between neighbours.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

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It is often observed that people today are less close to their neighbours than they were in the past. This essay will examine the reasons for this change and suggest ways in which neighbourly contact could be improved.

Several factors explain this trend. Firstly, modern lifestyles leave people with little free time. Long working hours and lengthy commutes mean that many people spend most of their day away from home, returning only in the evening when they are too tired to socialise. Secondly, urbanisation has changed the way people live. In large cities, many people live in high-rise apartment blocks where residents rarely see each other, and the sheer number of people can create a sense of anonymity. Thirdly, people are more mobile than in previous generations, often moving home for work or study, so they may not stay in one neighbourhood long enough to build relationships. Finally, technology has made it easier for people to maintain friendships with those who live far away, reducing their reliance on neighbours for company and support.

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