IELTS Writing Task 2 · Problem & Solution

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world.

Nguyên nhân / vấn đề và giải pháp 40 phút · tối thiểu 250 từ Bài mẫu 6.0 Bài mẫu 7.0 Bài mẫu 9.0 trong app

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Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world.

What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

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Nowadays, the number of homeless people is increasing in many big cities around the world. In this essay, I will discuss the main causes of this problem and suggest some solutions.

There are several reasons why homelessness is increasing. The first reason is the high cost of housing. In big cities like London or New York, the price of houses and rent is very high, so many poor people cannot afford a place to live. Secondly, unemployment is another cause. When people lose their jobs, they cannot pay their rent, and they may have to live on the street. Thirdly, some people become homeless because of personal problems, such as drug or alcohol addiction, mental illness or family breakdown. For example, some young people leave home because of problems with their parents and they have nowhere to go.

There are some measures that can be taken to solve this problem. Firstly, the government should build more cheap houses for poor people, so they can afford to rent a home. Secondly, the government should help homeless people to find jobs by giving them training and education. This will help them earn money and live independently. Moreover, there should be more support for people with health problems, such as free treatment for drug addiction and mental illness. Charities and local communities can also help by providing food, clothes and temporary shelters.

In conclusion, homelessness is caused by high housing prices, unemployment and personal problems. To solve this problem, governments and communities should work together to provide cheap housing, job training and health support.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

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Homelessness has become an increasingly visible problem in many of the world's major cities. This essay will examine the main causes of this trend and propose some measures that could help to address it.

The most significant cause is the lack of affordable housing. In many large cities, property prices and rents have risen far faster than wages, meaning that low-income workers can struggle to pay for accommodation. Even a small financial setback, such as a sudden rise in rent or an unexpected bill, can push vulnerable families into homelessness. Unemployment and insecure work, such as short-term or zero-hours contracts, make the situation worse, as people without a stable income may fall behind on payments. In addition, personal factors play an important role. Mental health problems, drug and alcohol addiction, and family breakdown can all lead people to lose their homes, and these issues often make it difficult for them to escape homelessness once it occurs.

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