IELTS Writing Task 2 · Advantages & Disadvantages

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.

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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.

What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + nêu bên nào lớn hơn (nếu đề hỏi outweigh).
  2. Thân bài 1Các lợi ích (hoặc mặt yếu hơn), có giải thích.
  3. Thân bài 2Các bất lợi (hoặc mặt mạnh hơn), có giải thích và ví dụ.
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  • Tránh liệt kê quá nhiều ý, 2 ý mỗi bên phát triển sâu là đủ.
  • Từ nối: One major benefit…, A significant drawback…

Bài mẫu band 6.0

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Nowadays, some parents buy a lot of toys for their children. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages for children of having many toys.

There are some advantages of having a lot of toys. Firstly, toys can help children to learn and develop many skills. For example, puzzles and building blocks can improve children's problem-solving skills and creativity, while books and educational games can help them to learn letters, numbers and colours. If children have many different toys, they can develop many different skills. Secondly, toys can keep children busy and happy, especially when their parents are working or busy with housework. Thirdly, children can share their toys with their friends and siblings, which helps them to learn how to play together.

However, there are also some disadvantages. Firstly, when children have too many toys, they may not value them. They may play with a toy for a short time and then forget it and ask for a new one. As a result, they may become spoiled and not understand the value of money. Secondly, too many toys can stop children from using their imagination. If children have only a few toys, they have to be creative and invent their own games. Thirdly, children with many toys may spend most of their time playing alone at home, instead of playing outside or with other children. In addition, buying a lot of toys is expensive for parents and creates a lot of waste.

In conclusion, having a large number of toys can help children learn and have fun. However, it can also make them spoiled, less creative and less social. Therefore, parents should buy a reasonable number of good quality toys for their children.

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Many parents today buy their children a large number of toys. While this can offer some benefits, it may also have negative effects on children's development.

One advantage of having many toys is that children are exposed to a wide range of learning opportunities. Different types of toys develop different skills: construction sets encourage spatial awareness and problem-solving, art materials foster creativity, and educational games can support early literacy and numeracy. A varied collection may therefore help children discover their interests and talents. In addition, having plenty of toys can keep children entertained, which may be particularly helpful for busy parents, and sharing toys with siblings or friends can teach children to cooperate and take turns.

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