IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem.

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Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

266 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that overpopulation is the most serious environmental problem in the world. I partly agree with this statement, because overpopulation causes many environmental problems, but I think there are other problems that are also very serious.

On the one hand, overpopulation is a big problem for the environment. When there are more people, they need more food, water, houses and energy. As a result, forests are cut down to build houses and farms, and many animals lose their homes. More people also use more cars and electricity, which produce more pollution and carbon dioxide. For example, in big cities like Delhi, the air pollution is very bad because there are too many people and vehicles. In addition, more people create more rubbish, especially plastic, which pollutes the land and the oceans.

On the other hand, I do not think overpopulation is the most serious problem. In my opinion, climate change is more serious, because it affects the whole world. It causes extreme weather, such as floods, storms and droughts, and the sea level is rising. Moreover, the problem is not only the number of people but also how people live. For example, people in rich countries use much more energy and produce much more waste than people in poor countries, even though there are fewer people in rich countries.

Therefore, I believe that changing our lifestyle, such as using clean energy and consuming less, is as important as controlling the population.

In conclusion, although overpopulation causes many environmental problems, I think that climate change and the way people consume resources are more serious problems.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

278 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is often claimed that overpopulation is the greatest environmental threat facing the world today. While I agree that population growth contributes significantly to environmental damage, I believe that the way people consume resources is an even more important factor.

There is no doubt that a growing population puts pressure on the environment. More people require more food, water, housing and energy, which leads to deforestation, the loss of wildlife habitats and the overuse of water resources. Expanding cities consume farmland and natural areas, while larger populations produce more waste and greenhouse gases. In some densely populated regions, such as parts of South Asia, these pressures are already causing severe air and water pollution.

However, I do not think overpopulation is the most serious problem. The environmental impact of a population depends largely on how much each person consumes. For example, the average person in a wealthy country such as the United States produces many times more carbon emissions than someone in a populous but poorer country such as India or Nigeria. This suggests that high levels of consumption in developed countries, rather than population numbers alone, are the main cause of problems such as climate change. Furthermore, climate change itself, driven largely by the burning of fossil fuels, threatens to cause widespread damage through extreme weather, rising sea levels and the loss of biodiversity.

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