IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet.

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Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted.

How far do you agree with this statement?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

276 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Nowadays, students use the Internet more and more for their studies. Some people believe that although the Internet is convenient, it has many bad effects, so its use in education should be limited. I partly agree with this opinion.

On the one hand, the Internet has some negative effects on students. Firstly, there is a lot of wrong or unreliable information on the Internet, and students may not know which information is true. Secondly, some students copy information from websites for their homework and essays, instead of thinking by themselves. This is called plagiarism, and it stops students from developing their own ideas. Thirdly, the Internet can easily distract students. When they study online, they often check social media, watch videos or play games, so they waste a lot of time.

On the other hand, I do not think that the use of the Internet in education should be strongly restricted, because it also has many advantages. The Internet gives students access to a huge amount of information, such as online books, articles and videos. Students can also take online courses from famous universities for free. In addition, the Internet helps students to communicate with their teachers and classmates, and to study at home when they cannot go to school, for example during the Covid-19 pandemic.

In my opinion, instead of restricting the Internet, teachers should teach students how to use it correctly, for example how to find reliable information and avoid copying.

In conclusion, although the Internet has some negative effects on students, I do not think its use for education should be restricted too much, because it is a very useful tool for learning.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

277 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Students today rely heavily on the Internet for their studies, and some people argue that, because of its negative effects, its use for educational purposes should be limited. While I acknowledge that the Internet presents certain risks, I largely disagree that its use should be restricted.

There are undoubtedly some drawbacks to students' dependence on the Internet. A great deal of online information is inaccurate, biased or out of date, and students may lack the skills to evaluate it critically. The ease of copying and pasting material also encourages plagiarism, which prevents students from developing their own ideas and writing skills. Furthermore, the Internet is full of distractions such as social media, games and videos, which can reduce students' concentration and productivity.

However, these problems do not justify restricting access to such a valuable resource. The Internet provides students with instant access to an enormous range of information, including academic journals, e-books and educational videos, much of which would otherwise be unavailable. Online learning platforms and courses allow students to study at their own pace and to explore subjects beyond their school curriculum. Moreover, during the Covid-19 pandemic, the Internet enabled millions of students to continue their education when schools were closed. Restricting its use would therefore deprive students of significant learning opportunities.

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