IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school.

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The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school.

To what extent do you agree with this statement and why?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

277 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that the education children get from their family is more important than the education they get from school. In my opinion, I mostly agree with this statement, although school education is also very important.

Firstly, family is the first place where children learn. From a very young age, children learn how to speak, how to behave and how to treat other people from their parents. Parents teach children important values such as honesty, kindness and respect. These values will stay with children for their whole life and help them to become good people. For example, if parents always help their neighbours, their children will also learn to help others. Secondly, children spend a lot of time with their family, especially in the first years of their life, so family has a very strong influence on their personality.

On the other hand, school education is also important. At school, children learn academic subjects such as mathematics, science and languages, which parents may not be able to teach. Teachers are trained to teach these subjects in an effective way. In addition, at school children learn how to work with other children, follow rules and make friends. These skills are very useful for their future.

In my opinion, family education is more important because it builds the character of a child. A child who has good knowledge but bad behaviour will not be successful in life. However, both family and school should work together to educate children.

In conclusion, I agree that the education from family is more important than school education, because family teaches children values and good behaviour, which are the basis of their life.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

286 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is often argued that the education people receive from their families is more important than what they learn at school. While both play vital roles, I largely agree with this view, because the family shapes a person's character and values, which form the foundation for everything else.

The family is the first and most influential source of education in a child's life. Long before children start school, they learn language, social behaviour and basic moral values from their parents and other relatives. It is within the family that children develop qualities such as honesty, empathy, self-discipline and respect for others. These values tend to remain with people throughout their lives and influence their decisions and relationships. Moreover, parents' attitudes towards learning have a significant impact on children's academic success; children whose parents read to them and encourage curiosity are often more motivated at school.

Nevertheless, school education is also essential. Schools provide structured knowledge in subjects such as mathematics, science and languages, taught by trained professionals, which most families would be unable to offer. Schools also teach children to interact with people from different backgrounds, work in teams and follow rules, preparing them for life in wider society. For children from difficult family backgrounds, school may even provide the stability and guidance that is lacking at home.

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