IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers.

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New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
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Bài mẫu band 6.0

271 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Nowadays, new technologies and new ways of buying and selling, such as online shopping and mobile payment, are changing the lives of consumers. I completely agree with this opinion.

Firstly, online shopping has changed the way people buy things. In the past, people had to go to shops or markets to buy what they needed. Now, they can buy almost everything on the internet, from clothes and books to food and furniture, and the products are delivered to their homes. This saves a lot of time, especially for busy people. For example, in my country, many people use apps like Shopee or Lazada to buy things every week. Secondly, consumers can compare prices easily on the internet and read reviews from other buyers, so they can find cheaper and better products.

In addition, new ways of paying are also changing people's lives. Many people now pay with their smartphones or credit cards instead of cash. This is faster and more convenient. In some countries, like China, people almost never use cash anymore.

However, these changes also have some problems. Some people spend too much money because buying online is very easy. There is also a risk that personal information and bank details can be stolen online. Moreover, small local shops may close because they cannot compete with big online companies.

In my opinion, although there are some problems, new technologies have changed the lives of consumers in a positive way, because shopping is now easier, faster and cheaper.

In conclusion, I strongly agree that new technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming consumers' lives, mostly in a good way.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

270 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

In recent years, developments such as e-commerce, mobile payments and personalised online advertising have changed the way people buy and sell goods. I strongly agree that these innovations are transforming the lives of consumers, although not all of the changes are positive.

The most obvious change is the rise of online shopping. Consumers can now purchase almost any product at any time of day without leaving their homes, and items are often delivered within a day or two. This has saved people considerable time and effort, and has made a far wider range of products available, including goods from other countries. Online platforms also allow consumers to compare prices and read reviews from other customers, enabling them to make better-informed decisions. Meanwhile, digital payment methods such as mobile wallets and contactless cards have made transactions faster and more convenient, and in some countries cash is rapidly disappearing.

However, these changes also have drawbacks. The ease of online shopping and one-click payment can encourage impulse buying and overspending, leading some people into debt. Consumers' personal data is constantly collected and used to target advertising, raising concerns about privacy and manipulation. In addition, the growth of online retail has caused many traditional shops to close, changing the character of high streets and reducing the social aspect of shopping.

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