IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Globalization is creating a world of one culture and destroying national identity.

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Globalization is creating a world of one culture and destroying national identity.

To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
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Bài mẫu band 6.0

273 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Nowadays, globalization is connecting countries all over the world through trade, travel and the internet. Some people believe that globalization is creating one world culture and destroying national identity. I partly agree with this statement.

On the one hand, it is true that globalization makes many countries more similar. For example, in almost every big city in the world, we can see the same shops and restaurants, such as McDonald's, Starbucks and Zara. Young people in different countries watch the same Hollywood films, listen to the same pop music and wear the same kind of clothes. In addition, English is becoming a global language, and some young people use English words more than their own language. As a result, some traditional customs, languages and ways of life are disappearing.

On the other hand, I do not think that national identity is being completely destroyed. Many countries still keep their own traditions, festivals and food. For example, people in Vietnam still celebrate the Lunar New Year, and people in Japan still wear kimonos at special events. Moreover, globalization can also help to spread national culture to other countries. For instance, Korean music and films have become very popular all over the world, so more people know about Korean culture. Many people also travel to other countries because they want to see different cultures.

In my opinion, globalization changes national cultures, but it does not destroy them. Countries should protect their traditions and teach young people about their own culture.

In conclusion, I partly agree that globalization is making the world more similar, but I believe that national identity still remains strong in many countries.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

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Globalisation has brought countries closer together through trade, technology and travel, leading some people to claim that it is creating a single global culture at the expense of national identity. While I agree that globalisation has made societies more alike in certain respects, I do not believe that national identity is being destroyed.

There is clear evidence that globalisation has led to a degree of cultural uniformity. International brands such as McDonald's, Starbucks and Apple can be found in cities across the world, and young people in very different countries often consume the same films, music and fashion. The dominance of English in business, science and the internet has also put pressure on smaller languages, some of which are in danger of disappearing. In this sense, local traditions and lifestyles are sometimes replaced by a global, largely Western, consumer culture.

However, it would be an exaggeration to say that national identities are disappearing. Many countries continue to celebrate their traditional festivals, cuisines and customs, and in some cases globalisation has actually strengthened people's desire to preserve their heritage. Furthermore, cultural influence does not flow in only one direction. The global popularity of Japanese anime, Korean pop music and Indian cinema shows that globalisation can also enable non-Western cultures to reach international audiences and gain recognition. Rather than simply being replaced, local cultures often adapt, combining global influences with their own traditions.

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