IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase.

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Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
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  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

304 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people believe that without the death penalty, our lives are less safe and violent crimes increase, so capital punishment is necessary to control violence in society. I disagree with this opinion for several reasons.

On the one hand, I understand why some people support the death penalty. They believe that people will be afraid to commit serious crimes, such as murder, if they know they may be executed. They also think that it is fair for criminals who have killed other people to lose their own lives. In addition, executing dangerous criminals means that they can never commit crimes again.

On the other hand, I do not think that the death penalty is necessary to control violence. Firstly, there is not much evidence that the death penalty reduces crime. Many countries that do not have the death penalty, such as Canada, Norway and most European countries, have lower murder rates than some countries that use it. This shows that the death penalty does not make people safer. Secondly, many violent crimes happen when people are angry, drunk or using drugs, so they do not think about the punishment before they act. Thirdly, the justice system can make mistakes, and innocent people may be executed. For example, in the USA, many people on death row were later found to be innocent.

In my opinion, there are better ways to control violence. Firstly, dangerous criminals can be put in prison for life, which also protects society. Secondly, the government should solve the causes of crime, such as poverty, unemployment and drug addiction. Thirdly, the police should be more effective, because people are more afraid of being caught than of the punishment.

In conclusion, I disagree that capital punishment is essential to control violence. Other methods are more effective and do not risk killing innocent people.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

335 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Some people argue that capital punishment is essential for controlling violent crime and that society would be less safe without it. I strongly disagree with this view, as the evidence does not support the idea that the death penalty reduces violence, and there are more effective ways to protect the public.

Supporters of capital punishment make several arguments. They claim that the threat of execution acts as a powerful deterrent, discouraging potential offenders from committing serious crimes. They also argue that executing the most dangerous criminals permanently removes them from society, ensuring they can never harm anyone again. Furthermore, many believe that the death penalty provides justice for victims and their families.

However, these arguments are not convincing. The central claim, that the death penalty deters violence, is not supported by evidence. Numerous studies have found no clear link between capital punishment and lower rates of violent crime. In fact, many countries that have abolished the death penalty, including most of Europe, have significantly lower murder rates than countries that retain it. One reason is that many violent crimes are committed in moments of extreme emotion or under the influence of alcohol or drugs, when offenders do not rationally consider the consequences. Others are committed by people who do not expect to be caught. Moreover, the death penalty carries the unacceptable risk of executing innocent people, as demonstrated by the many prisoners who have been released from death row after new evidence proved their innocence.

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