IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies.

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Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent would you say that television has positively or negatively affected the cultural development of your society?

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  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
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Bài mẫu band 6.0

300 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Television has had a big influence on the culture of many societies, including my country, Vietnam. In my opinion, television has had both positive and negative effects on the cultural development of my society, but I believe the positive effects are greater.

On the one hand, television has had many positive effects. Firstly, it helps to protect and promote traditional Vietnamese culture. There are many TV programmes about traditional music, festivals, food and history, which help young people to learn about their culture. For example, during the Lunar New Year, TV channels show special programmes about traditional customs, which are watched by millions of families. Secondly, television helps people to learn about other cultures. Through foreign films, documentaries and travel programmes, Vietnamese people can learn about the lives and customs of people in other countries, which makes them more open-minded. Thirdly, television has helped to spread the national language and connect people in different regions of the country.

On the other hand, television also has some negative effects. Firstly, there are many foreign programmes, especially from the USA, Korea and China, which are very popular with young people. Some young people prefer foreign music, fashion and lifestyles to Vietnamese ones, so traditional culture may become less popular. Secondly, some TV programmes show violence or unhealthy lifestyles, which can have a bad influence on young people. Thirdly, people spend a lot of time watching TV, so they have less time for traditional activities, such as visiting relatives and neighbours or taking part in community events.

In my opinion, the positive effects of television are greater than the negative effects, but the government should encourage more high-quality Vietnamese programmes.

In conclusion, television has affected the culture of my society both positively and negatively, but overall, I believe its influence has been positive.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

305 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Television has profoundly influenced the cultures of many societies over the past half-century. In my country, Vietnam, I believe that its overall impact on cultural development has been positive, although it has also brought certain negative effects.

One of the most important positive effects of television is its role in preserving and promoting national culture. Vietnamese television broadcasts programmes on traditional music, crafts, cuisine and history, as well as coverage of festivals such as the Lunar New Year and the Mid-Autumn Festival, which are watched by families throughout the country. These programmes help younger generations to understand and appreciate their heritage. Television has also played a unifying role, connecting people across different regions and ethnic groups through shared programmes and a common national language. In addition, by broadcasting foreign films, documentaries and news, television has broadened Vietnamese people's knowledge of the world and helped them to understand other cultures, contributing to the country's integration into the global community.

However, television has also had some negative effects on cultural development. The popularity of foreign programmes, particularly Korean dramas, American films and international music shows, has led some young people to embrace foreign fashions, values and lifestyles at the expense of traditional ones. There are concerns that this could gradually weaken Vietnamese cultural identity. Furthermore, some commercial programmes promote materialism or contain violent content that may influence young viewers negatively. Television has also changed social habits, as people now spend evenings watching programmes rather than visiting neighbours or participating in community activities, which were once central to Vietnamese village culture.

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