IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Many people believe that television programs are of no value for children.

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Many people believe that television programs are of no value for children. Do you agree? Why or why not?
Provide reasons and examples to support your response.

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

304 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Many people believe that watching television is bad for children. I partly agree with this statement. Watching too much television can have negative effects on children, but if children watch suitable programmes for a limited time, television can also be useful.

On the one hand, television can be bad for children in several ways. Firstly, children who watch a lot of TV usually do less exercise, because they sit in front of the screen for many hours instead of playing outside. This can lead to health problems such as obesity and eye problems. Secondly, some TV programmes contain violence, bad language or other unsuitable content. Children often copy what they see on TV, so they may become more aggressive or learn bad behaviour. Thirdly, there are many advertisements for fast food, sweets and toys on TV, which encourage children to want unhealthy food and expensive things. Moreover, watching too much TV can take time away from homework, reading and family activities.

On the other hand, television can also be good for children. There are many educational programmes that help children to learn about science, history, nature and other cultures. For example, documentaries about animals and the environment can teach children a lot about the world. Some children's programmes also help young children to learn letters, numbers and English. In addition, watching television together can be a fun family activity, and families can talk about what they have watched.

In my opinion, television is not bad for children if parents control what their children watch and how long they watch it. Parents should choose suitable programmes and limit TV time to about one hour a day.

In conclusion, I partly agree that watching television is bad for children. It can be harmful if children watch too much, but it can also be educational and enjoyable.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

306 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

It is often claimed that watching television is harmful to children. While I accept that excessive or unsupervised viewing can have negative consequences, I disagree that television is inherently bad for children, as carefully chosen programmes, watched in moderation, can be both educational and enjoyable.

There are certainly risks associated with children's television viewing. The most obvious concerns physical health: children who spend several hours a day watching television are less physically active, which contributes to the rising rates of childhood obesity. Prolonged viewing may also affect eyesight and disrupt sleep, particularly if children watch late in the evening. In addition, some programmes contain violence, inappropriate language or unrealistic portrayals of life, and young children, who tend to imitate what they see, may adopt aggressive behaviour or harmful attitudes. Television advertising is another concern, as it often promotes unhealthy food and encourages materialism. Finally, time spent watching television is time not spent reading, playing creatively or interacting with family and friends.

Nevertheless, television can also have significant benefits. High-quality educational programmes can teach young children letters, numbers and vocabulary, while nature documentaries and science programmes can spark curiosity and introduce children to places and ideas they would otherwise never encounter. For example, many children develop a lasting interest in wildlife or space after watching documentaries. Television can also expose children to different cultures and languages, and watching programmes together can provide families with enjoyable shared experiences and topics for discussion.

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