IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers.

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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers.
What factors do you think influence these decisions?
Do we become used to bad news?
Would it he better if more good news was reported?

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  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
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  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

306 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

News editors decide which stories are shown on television and printed in newspapers. In this essay, I will discuss the factors that influence their decisions, whether we become used to bad news, and whether more good news should be reported.

There are several factors that influence news editors' decisions. Firstly, editors choose stories that are important and affect many people, such as elections, natural disasters or economic problems. Secondly, they choose stories that will attract a large audience, because more viewers and readers mean more money from advertising. Dramatic stories, such as crimes, accidents and scandals, often attract the most attention. Thirdly, the owners of the newspaper or TV channel and the government may also influence which stories are reported.

I believe that people do become used to bad news. Every day, we see news about wars, crimes, accidents and disasters. At first, these stories may shock us, but after a while, we may stop feeling anything. For example, when we hear about a big accident with many deaths, we may feel sad for a moment and then forget about it quickly. This is dangerous, because people may stop caring about other people's suffering.

In my opinion, it would be better if more good news was reported. Too much bad news can make people feel stressed, worried and hopeless about the world. Good news, such as stories about scientific discoveries, people helping each other or communities solving problems, can make people feel more positive and encourage them to do good things. However, the media should not hide important bad news, because people need to know what is happening in the world.

In conclusion, news editors' decisions are influenced by importance, audience interest and money. People can become used to bad news, so I believe the media should report more good news while still reporting important events.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

320 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

News editors play a powerful role in shaping public awareness, as they decide which stories appear on television and in newspapers. This essay will consider the factors that influence these decisions, discuss whether audiences become desensitised to bad news and argue that a greater balance of positive news would be beneficial.

Several factors influence editorial decisions. The first is newsworthiness: stories that affect large numbers of people, such as elections, economic crises or natural disasters, are naturally prioritised. A second factor is audience appeal. Since media organisations depend on advertising revenue and subscriptions, editors favour stories that will attract attention, which often means dramatic, emotional or shocking events such as crimes, conflicts and scandals. Thirdly, the interests of owners, advertisers and, in some countries, governments may influence which stories are covered and how they are presented. Finally, practical considerations, such as the availability of images, also affect what is broadcast.

I believe that people do become accustomed to bad news. Because negative stories dominate the headlines, audiences are constantly exposed to reports of violence, war and tragedy. Over time, this can lead to "compassion fatigue", in which people become less emotionally responsive to the suffering of others. Paradoxically, constant exposure to bad news can also make people believe the world is more dangerous than it actually is, causing unnecessary anxiety.

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