IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Using a computer every day

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Đề bài

Using a computer every day
can have more negative than positive effects on your children.

Do you agree or disagree?

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

283 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Nowadays, many children use computers every day for studying and entertainment. Some people believe that using a computer every day has more negative effects than positive effects on children. I disagree with this opinion, because I think the effects depend on how children use computers.

On the one hand, using computers every day can have some negative effects. Firstly, if children spend too much time in front of the screen, they may have health problems, such as eye problems, back pain and obesity, because they do not do enough physical activity. Secondly, some children become addicted to computer games and social media, so they do not focus on their studies. Thirdly, children may see harmful content on the internet, such as violence, or they may talk to strangers who want to hurt them.

On the other hand, computers also have many positive effects. Firstly, computers are very useful for education. Children can find information for their homework, watch educational videos and use learning apps to practise maths or languages. Secondly, using computers helps children to develop computer skills, which are very important for their future jobs. Thirdly, children can use computers to communicate with their friends and family, and to be creative, for example by drawing pictures, making videos or learning to code.

In my opinion, using computers every day is not bad for children if parents control the time and the content. Parents should set time limits, use parental controls and encourage children to do other activities such as sports and reading.

In conclusion, I disagree that using computers every day has more negative than positive effects on children. If children use computers in a sensible way, they can get many benefits.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

289 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Computers have become a part of daily life for many children, and some people believe that using them every day does more harm than good. While I acknowledge that excessive computer use can be harmful, I disagree that daily use is necessarily more negative than positive.

There are certainly risks associated with frequent computer use. Spending long hours in front of a screen can lead to physical problems such as eye strain, poor posture and a sedentary lifestyle, which increases the risk of obesity. Children may also become overly attached to video games or social media, which can reduce their concentration, interfere with sleep and take time away from homework, outdoor play and face-to-face interaction with family and friends. In addition, the internet exposes children to potential dangers, including inappropriate content, cyberbullying and contact with strangers.

However, these risks are largely the result of excessive or unsupervised use, rather than daily use itself. When used appropriately, computers offer considerable benefits. They provide access to an enormous range of educational resources, from interactive learning programmes to online encyclopaedias and tutorials, which can make learning more engaging and help children develop independent research skills. Regular computer use also builds digital literacy, which is essential for success in education and the modern workplace. Moreover, computers can encourage creativity through activities such as coding, digital art and video production, and allow children to stay connected with friends and relatives.

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