IELTS Writing Task 2 · Discussion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

289 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Successful sportspeople can earn much more money than people in other important jobs, such as doctors, nurses and teachers. Some people think this is fair, while others believe it is unfair. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

On the one hand, some people believe that high salaries for sports stars are fair. Firstly, top athletes have special talents, and only a very small number of people can play at that level. They also have to train very hard for many years, often from childhood. Secondly, their careers are very short. Most athletes retire in their thirties, so they need to earn a lot of money while they can. Thirdly, sports stars bring a lot of money to their clubs and sponsors, because millions of fans buy tickets, watch matches on TV and buy products with their names. So, it is fair that they get a share of this money.

On the other hand, other people think it is unfair. Doctors save lives, teachers educate children and nurses take care of sick people, and these jobs are more important to society than playing sport. However, these workers often earn much less money. For example, a top footballer can earn more money in one week than a nurse earns in several years. This shows that society does not value important jobs enough.

In my opinion, I can understand why sports stars earn a lot of money, but I think that the difference is too big. The government should pay more to people in important jobs like doctors, nurses and teachers.

In conclusion, although sports stars have special talents and short careers, I believe that their very high salaries are unfair compared with other important professions.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

292 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Top athletes often earn far more than professionals in other important fields, such as medicine and education. While some argue that these high earnings are fully justified, others regard them as unfair. In my view, although the salaries of sports stars can be explained by market forces, the enormous gap between their earnings and those of essential workers is difficult to justify.

Those who defend athletes' high salaries make several valid points. Elite athletes possess exceptional talent, which is extremely rare, and they typically devote many years of rigorous training and personal sacrifice to reach the top of their sport. Their careers are also short and uncertain, as injury can end them at any time, and most retire by their mid-thirties. In addition, sports stars generate huge revenues for their clubs, broadcasters and sponsors through ticket sales, television rights and merchandise. From this perspective, their salaries simply reflect the value they create in a commercial market.

On the other hand, critics argue that these earnings are disproportionate to their contribution to society. Doctors, nurses and teachers perform work that is essential to human well-being, saving lives and educating future generations, yet they are often paid only a fraction of what top athletes earn. For instance, an elite footballer may earn more in a week than a nurse earns in several years. This disparity suggests that society rewards entertainment more highly than vital public services.

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