IELTS Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would

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Đề bài

If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would
you change?

Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

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Bài mẫu band 6.0

275 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Every town has good points and bad points. If I could change one important thing about my hometown, I would improve the public transport system. In this essay, I will explain why.

My hometown is a medium-sized city, and the population has grown quickly in recent years. However, the public transport is not very good. There are only a few bus routes, the buses are often late and crowded, and there is no metro or tram system. Because of this, most people use motorbikes or cars to go to work or school.

Firstly, better public transport would reduce traffic jams. Every morning and evening, the main roads in my hometown are full of motorbikes and cars, and it can take a long time to travel a short distance. If there were more buses and a metro line, many people would leave their vehicles at home, and the roads would be less crowded.

Secondly, it would reduce air pollution. The smoke from thousands of motorbikes and cars makes the air dirty, and many people, especially children and old people, have breathing problems. Public transport, especially electric buses, would make the air cleaner and healthier.

Thirdly, good public transport would help people who cannot drive, such as old people, students and poor people. They could travel easily and cheaply to work, school, hospitals and markets. For example, my grandmother cannot ride a motorbike, so she always needs someone to take her to the hospital.

In conclusion, if I could change one thing about my hometown, I would improve the public transport system, because it would reduce traffic jams and pollution and help many people travel more easily.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

292 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Like most places, my hometown has both strengths and weaknesses. If I could change one important thing about it, I would develop a modern and efficient public transport system, as this would improve the quality of life for almost everyone who lives there.

Over the past decade, my hometown has grown rapidly, but its transport infrastructure has not kept pace. There are only a handful of bus routes, services are infrequent and unreliable, and there is no rail or metro network. As a result, the vast majority of residents depend on motorbikes and private cars.

The most immediate benefit of better public transport would be a reduction in traffic congestion. During rush hours, the main roads become gridlocked, and journeys that should take ten minutes can last almost an hour. A reliable network of buses and, eventually, a light rail line would encourage many people to leave their vehicles at home, easing pressure on the roads.

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