IELTS Writing Task 2 · Advantages & Disadvantages

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community.

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Đề bài

A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + nêu bên nào lớn hơn (nếu đề hỏi outweigh).
  2. Thân bài 1Các lợi ích (hoặc mặt yếu hơn), có giải thích.
  3. Thân bài 2Các bất lợi (hoặc mặt mạnh hơn), có giải thích và ví dụ.
  4. Kết bàiKhẳng định lại đánh giá của bạn.
  • Đoạn bên bạn cho là nặng hơn nên viết sau và kỹ hơn.
  • Tránh liệt kê quá nhiều ý, 2 ý mỗi bên phát triển sâu là đủ.
  • Từ nối: One major benefit…, A significant drawback…

Bài mẫu band 6.0

291 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

A company has announced that it wants to build a large factory near my community. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this plan and explain whether I support it or not.

There are several advantages of having a new factory. Firstly, it will create many jobs for local people. Many young people in my community have to move to big cities to find work, but if there is a factory nearby, they can stay and work at home. Secondly, the factory will help the local economy. When workers earn money, they will spend it in local shops, restaurants and markets, so local businesses will also benefit. Thirdly, the company may build new roads and other facilities, which will improve the area.

However, there are also some disadvantages. The biggest problem is pollution. A large factory may produce smoke, noise and waste, which can pollute the air, water and land. This can be harmful for people's health and for farming. Secondly, there will be more trucks on the roads, which can cause traffic jams and accidents. Thirdly, the factory may change the quiet and peaceful life of the community, and some people may have to move because of the new buildings.

In my opinion, I support the factory, but only if the company follows strict environmental rules. The company should use modern technology to reduce pollution, treat its waste properly and build the factory away from homes and schools. The local government should also check the factory regularly.

In conclusion, a new factory can bring jobs and economic benefits to my community, but it can also cause pollution and traffic. I support the factory as long as it protects the environment and the health of local people.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

287 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

A company has recently announced plans to build a large factory near my community. This development could bring significant economic benefits, but it also raises important concerns. On balance, I would support the factory, provided that strict conditions are met.

The most obvious advantage is the creation of jobs. Unemployment is relatively high in my area, and many young people are forced to move to larger cities in search of work, which weakens families and the local community. A large factory could employ hundreds of local people, both directly and indirectly, giving them stable incomes and allowing them to stay close to home. The increased spending by workers would also benefit local shops, restaurants and service providers. In addition, the company would pay local taxes, which could be used to improve schools, roads and healthcare facilities.

However, there are also potential drawbacks. The most serious concern is environmental damage. Factories can pollute the air, water and soil, potentially harming residents' health and affecting local agriculture. Increased traffic from lorries transporting goods could cause congestion, noise and road safety risks, particularly near schools. Furthermore, the construction of a large industrial site could change the character of a quiet community and reduce green space.

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