IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion essay

Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2: The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income.

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The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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  1. Mở bàiParaphrase đề + thesis statement nêu rõ mức độ đồng ý.
  2. Thân bài 1Lý do chính thứ nhất ủng hộ quan điểm, có giải thích và ví dụ.
  3. Thân bài 2Lý do thứ hai, hoặc nhượng bộ quan điểm ngược lại rồi phản biện.
  4. Kết bàiNhắc lại quan điểm bằng cách diễn đạt khác, không thêm ý mới.
  • Đừng viết "partly agree" nếu không giải thích được ranh giới.
  • Mỗi đoạn một ý chính, có câu chủ đề rõ.
  • Ví dụ cụ thể giúp tăng điểm Task Response.

Bài mẫu band 6.0

279 từ. Bài đủ ý, bố cục rõ, từ vựng và ngữ pháp ở mức an toàn: đây là mức nhiều bạn cần để đạt mục tiêu 6.0.

Some people think that a high salary is the most important thing when choosing a career or a job. I disagree with this opinion, because although money is important, there are other things that are more important.

On the one hand, it is true that a high income is important. Everyone needs money to pay for their daily needs, such as food, housing and transport. A good salary also helps people to support their family, give their children a good education and save money for the future. In big cities, the cost of living is very high, so people need a well-paid job to have a comfortable life.

On the other hand, I believe that other factors are more important. Firstly, job satisfaction is very important. People spend about eight hours a day at work, so if they do not enjoy their job, they will feel bored and unhappy, even if they earn a lot of money. For example, a person who loves helping people may be happier as a teacher or a nurse than as a banker. Secondly, a good working environment, such as friendly colleagues and a good boss, is also important for people's happiness and health. Thirdly, some jobs with high salaries are very stressful and need very long working hours, so people do not have time for their family and hobbies.

In my opinion, people should choose a job that they enjoy and that gives them a reasonable income, not only the job with the highest salary.

In conclusion, I disagree that a high income is the most important consideration when choosing a job. Job satisfaction, working environment and work-life balance are also very important.

Bài mẫu band 7.0

285 từ. So với bài 6.0: lập luận sâu hơn, từ vựng chính xác và đa dạng hơn, câu phức dùng tự nhiên hơn.

Some people believe that earning a high income should be the main priority when choosing a career. While I accept that salary is an important factor, I disagree that it should be the most important consideration.

There is no doubt that income matters. A good salary allows people to afford a comfortable standard of living, support their families and save for the future. In many cities, the cost of housing and education is so high that a well-paid job may be necessary simply to meet basic needs. Moreover, for people from disadvantaged backgrounds, a high-paying career can be a way to achieve financial security and improve opportunities for their children.

However, I believe that other factors are more important in the long term. Firstly, job satisfaction has a significant impact on people's well-being. Since most adults spend a large part of their lives at work, doing a job they find meaningful and interesting is essential for their happiness. Many people who choose careers purely for money, such as in finance or law, later report feeling unfulfilled. Secondly, work-life balance is increasingly valued. High-paying jobs often involve long hours and considerable stress, leaving little time for family, friends and personal interests, which can damage health and relationships. Finally, factors such as job security, opportunities for development and a supportive working environment can contribute more to long-term success than salary alone.

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